Okay, three things; first off, still never watched Lost Girl, but if Kenzi and Saskia are half as awesome as you make them out to be right here, I might have to break my golden rule and torrent an episode or three... though your recent recaps kinda make me hesitate... at any rate, awesome story.

Two, the title Succubus Blues? Just a heads-up, but you want to make a little google image search about it, maybe alongside "Richelle Mead". You might find out it's actually the title of a book by a published author. I have no clue about this whatsover, but I'd hate to see you get in trouble for something this simple.

Third, and this is where I once more show I'm a complete urban fantasy geek, the plural of succubus is succubi.