ext_49198 ([identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fembuck 2007-10-06 05:11 pm (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and that 'tell not show' worked for parts of the story :D

I hope you enjoy the second part!
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