I second the sequel comment, if sequel means one every day for, oh, life.
Well, I don't know about every day for life, but I think I can manage a sequel at least, lol
Thanks for the detailed feedback, it's really helpful to know what people thought worked in the story and what elements they enjoyed the most.
And as much as I love sex, I find it more in character (and therefore more interesting to read) when Blair puts the breaks on things, regardless of how much she wants Serena.
I'm glad this felt organic. I had originally started to write it with the intention of them getting it on, but it just didn't feel right and the more I thought about it I just couldn't see Blair doing that soon.
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Well, I don't know about every day for life, but I think I can manage a sequel at least, lol
Thanks for the detailed feedback, it's really helpful to know what people thought worked in the story and what elements they enjoyed the most.
And as much as I love sex, I find it more in character (and therefore more interesting to read) when Blair puts the breaks on things, regardless of how much she wants Serena.
I'm glad this felt organic. I had originally started to write it with the intention of them getting it on, but it just didn't feel right and the more I thought about it I just couldn't see Blair doing that soon.