Thanks for the detailed feedback, it helps so much to know what people think worked well in a story. Also, I'm glad that you enjoyed it :D
And that even you can feel the sexual tension always around them, I totally can see them being gentle and kind at the moment of true.
I love that about them. It's so sexy. How they look at each other like they want to rip each others clothes off, but you could just as easily picture them snuggling together, laughing and watching How To Steal A Million on the couch. It's so utterly romantic.
When the get to the sex, that will be good too though ;)
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Thanks for the detailed feedback, it helps so much to know what people think worked well in a story. Also, I'm glad that you enjoyed it :D
And that even you can feel the sexual tension always around them, I totally can see them being gentle and kind at the moment of true.
I love that about them. It's so sexy. How they look at each other like they want to rip each others clothes off, but you could just as easily picture them snuggling together, laughing and watching How To Steal A Million on the couch. It's so utterly romantic.
When the get to the sex, that will be good too though ;)