ext_117818 ([identity profile] mysensitiveside.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fembuck 2008-02-07 02:40 am (UTC)

Fantastic fic, as always! Their lives are so crazy and intense during the day, and I like how you get into the "down time" of the night. And I love how Sarah can't stand the thought of being vulnerable, but eventually gives in to Cameron's comfort.

“You’re squeezing me,” Sarah murmured her heart pounding in her chest, her eyes continuing their unnaturally rapid succession of blinks as Cameron filled her senses.

“No, I’m comforting you”


Loved that part. :)

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