Thanks so much for the kind words, I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.

Cameron is the hardest for me to write and you got her down perfectly. The struggle/angst of Sarah is dead on too.

They're both so complex, I don't think that's I've gone through so many drafts for fics for any other fandom I've written in. I just need to play around with them so much before something clicks, but I'm happy to know that it is clicking ;)