ext_227261 ([identity profile] fantasticbs.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fembuck 2008-05-12 03:30 am (UTC)

That was absolutely perfect!

I actually loved the ending, even though I understand other people wanting more. You have a great sense of pace and the dialogue was totally on point. And Leighton must say this line in real life:

"There had to be better choices ...much better choices. Actually, there could only have been better choices."

Looking forward to more.

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