Alice is really hot when she's aroused and trying to stay in control!

I'm glad you think so! I like aroused!outofcontrol!Alice too. I love it when I'm able to write Alice being vampire-y. The vampireness is HOT, and I hated how the novels had them be so fangless (literally). That danger, that call animal quality is part of makes vampires so sexy.

Nice, I missed that problem in the books

I think SMeyer was hoping we would all just not think about it. But pervs like me did ;)