i'm with bella on the weirdness. i love jasper and i loveeeee the way you handle him in this crazy triangle (i refuse to acknowledge edward), but the bed was... yes, weird. but i see a bit of light here... jasper's sighs that alice couldn't understand, it seem like it was a sign of final resolve, like he was making that final, but painful decision already. i hope so. :D

and oooooohhhhh! finally! rosalie! i can't even explain how smitten i was with her mischievousness :)

i'll go reread your whole story, now that i can play ashley greene's "twinkling" voice for alice's character. omg. alice's voice is orgasmic. *sighs dreamily*