ext_49198 ([identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fembuck 2009-03-13 01:39 am (UTC)

Sweet, but there's so much tension floating between them

This. The tension between them was so completely and utterly delicious. The way they looked at each other was just ... unf!

it's like the first time Miriam sees Amina in the cafe and can't stop staring at her, except we know they're going to end up in bed together later.

Yeah. The forbidden nature of the relationship allows for that tension to still be there, but there's a satisfying element to it, because you know that they will get to, uh relieve that tension together ... before it starts building up again of course ;)

Thanks so much for commenting! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it :D

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