An equally strong-willed, witty and intelligent woman to match our favorite Mord'Sith, your Dahlia is a delight to read! :) Again, their banter and interaction is akin to a subconscious mating dance...so fluidly graceful and intricate. Cara and Dahlia are tv-canon and I so appreciate how well you are exemplifying that relationship and chemistry with this story and with your characterization of both of them.
Zedd coming clean to Richard and Kahlan regarding meddling with Cara's history and his explanation about Dahlia's path intersecting with Cara's whichever world he undo is short, sweet and simple. I love that you were able to get that little plot hole filled as early as now so the focus of the story could be now more on Cara and Dahlia rediscovering each other.
A beautiful update that makes me hunger for more! Thank you for continuing to write this story and for sharing it with all of us. :)
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Zedd coming clean to Richard and Kahlan regarding meddling with Cara's history and his explanation about Dahlia's path intersecting with Cara's whichever world he undo is short, sweet and simple. I love that you were able to get that little plot hole filled as early as now so the focus of the story could be now more on Cara and Dahlia rediscovering each other.
A beautiful update that makes me hunger for more! Thank you for continuing to write this story and for sharing it with all of us. :)
-Xam