If been reading this story in the last few days and I've got to tell you, that it might just be the best fan-fiction i ever found in my last two years of googeling through the web. You truly showed the characters what they are like for real (as we all know for sure cause what other possibility is there?! ^^).
However I would have loved for bella to have a special talent when turned but it seems to me that that might actually be charming (...among other things...) alice ... *_*