Brilliant fic! I've only seen the Twilight movie, but if the books suck half as much then this fic is the only redeeming thing about the series. I just have be thankful that every Alice/Bella scene in the film is really gay or I never would looked for this marvellous fic.
The Cullen's were awesome! (I loved them in the movie too except for Ed *yawn*). I'm glad Jazz got a girl in the end, I liked him.
Charlie had so much more personality in this than the film, you'd think yours was the live action. He was the perfect embodiment of a Dad: "Sure you can date my kid, just don't ever kiss her."
And there are just no words to describe the Alice/Bella pairing. It was just a perfect balance of light and intense, and sweet and angsty all the way through. Thank you for a great story!
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The Cullen's were awesome! (I loved them in the movie too except for Ed *yawn*). I'm glad Jazz got a girl in the end, I liked him.
Charlie had so much more personality in this than the film, you'd think yours was the live action. He was the perfect embodiment of a Dad: "Sure you can date my kid, just don't ever kiss her."
And there are just no words to describe the Alice/Bella pairing. It was just a perfect balance of light and intense, and sweet and angsty all the way through. Thank you for a great story!