http://alonwy.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] alonwy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fembuck 2011-09-20 08:51 am (UTC)

I didn't expect for the ritual to work that well, but I am so happy for them both that (after finding the right solution to the problem) it did.
It was so sweet that Needy sensed immediately that "her" Jennifer was back, and the way she just continues to be there for her.
And I like the "To be continued..." here. You could've had it end here. But I honestly hope for at least another chapter, if only to see how you'll write Jennifer now that the demon is gone :)) And those two are just too cute to just disappear. So....please please please with whipped cream on top? ^_^

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