ext_26012 ([identity profile] trancer21.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fembuck 2009-09-20 06:08 pm (UTC)

Lol, after your request for a beta, I was all 'if I have to wait more than 24 hours to read this fic? SOMEONE'S GETTING CUT!!'. So, yay for a quick beta turn around.

Seriously, lovely fic. I love how underneath Jennifer's tough girl, HBIC persona is someone who *needs* Needy. About needing to be the one to 'make it special' for Needy. I also liked Needy's inital resistance, like there's something intangible going on between her and Jennifer but she gives in because she trusts Jennifer more than anyone else.

And, oh yeah, the sex was hot!

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