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fembuck ([personal profile] fembuck) wrote2009-06-17 05:04 pm

Fic: The Jaws of the Wolf (Rachel/Ivy, The Hollows)

Title: The Jaws of the Wolf
Author: Janine
Fandom: The Hollows
Pairing: Rachel/Ivy
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I don’t own them.
Summary:  Ivy is caught, and that's the way she likes it.

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The metal loops are cold against my flesh and a shiver runs through me at the feel of their icy caress. Jagged silver teeth scratch the sensitive flesh of my wrists, and then the cold bands close around me, binding me. The clicking of the cuff as it tightens sounds unnaturally loud in my ears, but my senses are heightened and presently everything is more.

Rachel smiles; pleased with herself as the cuff binding me clangs loosely around the bed pole. I could break the cuff if I wanted. I could break the bed if I wanted. But I won’t. It is Rachel who holds me in place, not the cheap handcuff around my wrist, and it is Rachel alone who will keep me.

“Other arm.”

Her words are soft and slide over me like a caress. She’s described my voice as gray silk before. If I am silk then she is wine; rich, smooth and intoxicating. I could drink her to death.

I lift my arm and extend it backwards, resting my wrist delicately against one of the poles that compose my headboard. Rachel leans over me deliberately, pale breasts with pink, hard peaks hovering before my mouth, just out of reach. I could tilt my head up and claim one of the tantalizing buds, but she would be displeased, and would draw my pleasure out even longer as punishment.

She makes me behave. I like that she has that much power over me. I love it. I need it, like air, blood, the sun and Rachel herself.

My other arm is secured and she sits back, straddling my waist as she surveys her kingdom like a haughty god. She is supremely smug at the moment, ginger eyebrow arched as her eyes rake over me, and I like it. She has earned her prize. I am hers, and she can claim me at her leisure.

Warm hands splay out over my stomach and I breathe in deeply, stomach muscles twitching under her palms. She runs her hands over my heated flesh, exploring slowly like a conqueror appraising newly gotten lands. All mine, her hands seem to whisper as they roam up my sides, what shall I do now?

“Ivy,” she breathes out. “Ivy, Ivy, Ivy.”

She looks thoughtful and mischievous. It is a heady combination in Rachel and I shift beneath her, making her smile.

“I’m thinking such bad thoughts.”

She punctuates her statement by taking my nipple between her fingers and squeezing, hard. She knows I can take it. I like to take it, and she likes the way it makes me moan. She twists my nipple ruthlessly, again and again, watching my face the whole time, and with every stinging flick of her wrist, I love her more.

She leans forward and presses her lips to mine, kissing me softly as blunted fingernails bite into the skin at my hips, marking me. By morning the thin, angry red streaks will be gone, but she can see them now, and I can feel them and that’s all that matters.

“Rachel!”

Hands and lips begin to move with more purpose. Thought leaves me. It is impossible to think with strong fingers sliding inside of me and curling. It is impossible to think with sharp, white teeth chewing at my neck and hard, pebbled nipples pressing into me.

Sweat streaks my body and I strain desperately underneath her.

She denies me again and again.

She is in control, she has the power, and I will feel it. I will know that between us, tonight, she is the Big Bad Wolf, and I am Red Riding Hood trapped in the jaws of the wolf, helpless and completely at her mercy.

“Say please.”

I don’t.

She smiles, and it goes on.

An eternity later I am a panting, quivering, mewling mess, and half-mad with need I whisper, “Please.”

She is merciful.

Teeth clamp down on my neck, breaking the skin for the first time tonight. Her thumb presses hard against the slick, stiff bud between my legs …

… And I break.

Afterwards, I am a panting, quivering, smiling mess, and Rachel is soft and warm as she snuggles against my side.

The scent of redwood fills the air around me. The room is thick with the smell of Rachel, me, sex and a hint of blood. I shiver as the sweat on my skin rapidly cools, and Rachel wraps her arms around me, holding me tightly.

“You’re purring,” she whispers against my neck, kissing the mark she has left there.

She sounds happy.

“I am,” I confirm, closing my eyes as she softly tongues the bruise.

I’m happy too.
 

The End

[identity profile] cerchilaverita.livejournal.com 2009-06-17 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
That... was beautiful. And, you know, hot.

[identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 01:26 am (UTC)(link)
*fist pump*

Awesome!!!

[identity profile] lost-dreamer23.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome!!!

I know you are.

[identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 01:26 am (UTC)(link)
*smile*

Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! At least that exam preside was well spent, lol.

[identity profile] ic1pher.livejournal.com 2009-06-17 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Mr. Holmes: "Scorching."
Dr. Watson: "No shit, Sherlock."
*both gaze into distance, reflecting on recent events, smoking their pipes*

I wonder though, what is to become of creative plotlines. Has everything already been explored in the fics? Seems that most fics center on them getting together in a very direct fashion. If Kim made them each others enemies, things might get more interesting. I'm just having trouble thinking of reasons why they would be at opposing sides. Probably something to do with vampire politics, Rynn framing Ivy for something, Rachel blowing a fuse and Ivy being too stubborn to set things straight or something. Rachel's gargantuan cockblocking might also have something to do with it. Crap, still too long for the next book.

[identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 01:38 am (UTC)(link)
*both gaze into distance, reflecting on recent events, smoking their pipes*

lol!

I wonder though, what is to become of creative plotlines. Has everything already been explored in the fics? Seems that most fics center on them getting together in a very direct fashion. If Kim made them each others enemies, things might get more interesting.

Fic wise right now, I'm just burned out on longer Hollows fics. And I'm kind of burned out on finding ways to keep them apart. So, like all I'm capable of writing right now (or even just contemplating) are ones where they are together already.

I'm sure Kim isn't out of ideas about how to keep them separated though ;) And I'm pretty sure she'll come up with a great way to get them together in the end that probably hasn't been explored in fic, that will have to do with the mythology of the series that us fic writers aren't privy to/can't imagine. I did like that comment from the drama box about demons not being able to be turned however. I think when Rachel realizes that Ivy CAN'T bind her, that it'll be a HUGE turning point in their relationship. Although now that I've read that, I'll probably try to fic it (when my brain doesn't feel like goo anymore, lol).

I think you're right and that having a rift from between them for a while is like one of the only ways that makes sense to me to keep keeping them apart. At least a fight/philosophical rift is a sensible explanation for why they wouldn't be together. drzaa makes some good arguments pointing out the steady growth of their relationship, but as it stands right now it just seems so stupid to me how much in limbo they are with each other.

Image

The practically already being married to each other, and sharing auras and being each others home/anchor and yet NOT actually being together thing just makes me feel like that cat.

Crap, still too long for the next book.

This I'll agree with. Reading all the books back to back really spoiled me. I have no patience for this waiting game now. I just wish I could read the next four books or whatever back to back and get just get it all over with. I have the attention span of a sugared up five year old, this waiting is KILLING me.

(Anonymous) 2009-06-18 04:20 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, man, this gif just kills me dead! It's so funny it's not even funny anymore. Thanks for the monster hiccups... jk.

Poor kitty...

[identity profile] ic1pher.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 12:35 pm (UTC)(link)
"I think when Rachel realizes that Ivy CAN'T bind her, that it'll be a HUGE turning point in their relationship, although now that I've read that, I'll probably try to fic it (when my brain doesn't feel like goo anymore, lol)."
You know, I think this will be awesome like the van scene except more, after which there will be some furious cock-blocking. They are rapidly running out of excuses--even the flimsy ones. I get kinda giddy, just from the idea what it would mean if Rachel couldn't be bound. Realistically, it will be ruined, but there's always hope.

[identity profile] su-bones.livejournal.com 2009-06-17 10:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow.

Not sure I'll manage to stay coherent for long enough, but whatever.

This is too hot. Dom!Rachel is even hotter than normal Rachel, Ivy is always too hot, and yeah...wow.

If I am silk then she is wine; rich, smooth and intoxicating

This line killed me dead. Love it. It helps remember that yes, Rachel is hot and sexy too, despite her high levels of obliviouness and plain dumbness.

[identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 01:40 am (UTC)(link)
lol! Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really like Dom!Rachel too, and Sub!Ivy. It's hot, and I think there would really be a dynamic like that to their relationship. Not all the time, but Ivy clearly needs someone who can control her at times, and Rachel would totally get off having Ivy so totally under her spell.

It helps remember that yes, Rachel is hot and sexy too, despite her high levels of obliviouness and plain dumbness.

It's so hard to remember sometimes, but it is true :D

[identity profile] su-bones.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 12:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Rachel would totally get off having Ivy so totally under her spell.

This.

It's so hard to remember sometimes, but it is true :D

LOL, yeah. And I really doubt Ivy loves her just for her ocasionally there smarts.

[identity profile] snowydragon1776.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 02:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Not all the time, but Ivy clearly needs someone who can control her at times
I agree there because I think Rachel needs someone who can control here as well...hence why they work for each other.

“Say please.”
I don’t.


Even there you show the push/pull of there relationship. All relationships have that especially when the couple
are equal/meant for one another.

But I agree with everyone this was hot.

I have an idea for a long rachel/Ivy fic...that slowly brings them together...I guess I should get started on that

[identity profile] dollfleshdecay.livejournal.com 2009-06-17 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I would quote all the lines I like and gush about them, but then I would be quoting the entire fic. So.. I'm just gonna say DAMN! That was supernova hot. Why don't you write for a living, bb? I would totes buy your books.

(Did my fic inspire/prompt the handcuffs?)

[identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
Why don't you write for a living, bb? I would totes buy your books.

I'm trying! My short attention span is killing me. I'm honestly going give cranking out an honest to god novel a go while I'm off this summer though.

I may complain about some authors (probably like K.H.), but I honestly respect the fuck out of anyone who's able to turn out a novel. It's fucking hard. I have to even give SMeyer that much. I don't think she's good, and I don't really like her books, but goddamn she's managed to get a lot of words down on paper, lol.

(Did my fic inspire/prompt the handcuffs?)

You know, unconsciously I think it did. I loved the hell out of that story, and after I read this comment when I went back and read the last paragraph of it again, I was like, "Yeah, it probably planted a kernel in my subconscious" and my handcuff p0rn came out of that, lol.

[identity profile] dollfleshdecay.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm honestly going give cranking out an honest to god novel a go while I'm off this summer though.

Yay! I totally believe you can do this. If you ever need any feedback or editing help, I'm here for ya bb.

but I honestly respect the fuck out of anyone who's able to turn out a novel. It's fucking hard.

True facts. I'd say writing is the easier part. Finding an agent to sell your work to a publisher is really really hard, especially for a new writer.

but goddamn she's managed to get a lot of words down on paper, lol.

Quality over quantity I always say. Plus a lot of times they don't like thick manuscripts for new authors, won't even look at them. It costs more for them to make if it’s longer, and it's a risk because they don't know if new authors will sell. At least that's what my grandma says. She is published, and worked at a publishing house too.

It still amazes me that SMeyer even got published, her writing is awful and the story is mediocre and contrived. Which is why most of the twilight film is dubbed over with music lol.

You know, unconsciously I think it did. I loved the hell out of that story, and after I read this comment when I went back and read the last paragraph of it again, I was like, "Yeah, it probably planted a kernel in my subconscious" and my handcuff p0rn came out of that, lol.

*grin* I'm so proud lol. Glad to be of help!

[identity profile] pie-tlw.livejournal.com 2009-06-17 11:38 pm (UTC)(link)
One word. HOT!!!

[identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
:D

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :D

[identity profile] bizarro-bluth.livejournal.com 2009-06-17 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely and omgsohot. Its nice to see a fic from Ivy's POV. I'm think about trying my hand at it, either Ivy/Alice Cullen because it would be hot and senseless or Ivy/Rachel watching and mocking Twilight b/c OMG sparkles!! loll

[identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 01:25 am (UTC)(link)
or Ivy/Rachel watching and mocking Twilight b/c OMG sparkles!! loll

Oh my god. I just handed my marks in, I can sleep in tomorrow, and I really, really wanna get super fucking high and drunk and write this! Fuck, that's a brilliant idea.

You need to give it a go! You have to. I will attempt it as well. God, this is a good idea. Do it! Do it! *peer pressure*

I'm think about trying my hand at it, either Ivy/Alice Cullen because it would be hot

Also, I would read this, and I would enjoy the fuck out of it. That's a lot of yummy right there. A LOT of yummy.

[identity profile] bizarro-bluth.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
I really, really wanna get super fucking high and drunk and write this! Fuck, that's a brilliant idea.

DUUUDE. YES. I was hoping you'd want to write it, there's just so much ~potential, you know? And I can never write when I'm messed up, so I admire that skill.

Also, I would read this, and I would enjoy the fuck out of it.

This is going to be the smuttiest, senseless crack!fic, I can already tell. LOLL


[identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 01:10 pm (UTC)(link)
YES. I was hoping you'd want to write it, there's just so much ~potential, you know?

It's been done (http://fembuck.livejournal.com/251454.html#cutid1). Read at your own risk! ;)

This is going to be the smuttiest, senseless crack!fic, I can already tell. LOLL

Yeeeeees!!!

[identity profile] sideadde.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 01:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh I would almost pay for an Ivy/Alice Cullen fic.
Anyone interested in collab? I can write a good slashy Alice(well decent enough), but I don't have Ivy's voice down well enough.


This story, amazing. I love your fics. I'm ashamed to say I mostly lurk.

[identity profile] bizarro-bluth.livejournal.com 2009-06-19 02:50 am (UTC)(link)
Anyone interested in collab? I can write a good slashy Alice(well decent enough), but I don't have Ivy's voice down well enough

Yeah I think Ivy's POV might be a bit tough for me as well, esp since I've only read book 1, but I've got a fic idea just need some freetime and I'll give it a go.

[identity profile] zearbear.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 08:08 am (UTC)(link)
Ivy/Rachel watching and mocking Twilight b/c OMG sparkles!! loll that would be and amaizing read
i could just imagin what Ivy would say abotu the sparkles
ohhh plz some one write that

[identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 01:10 pm (UTC)(link)

It's been done (http://fembuck.livejournal.com/251454.html#cutid1). Read at your own risk! ;)

[identity profile] toadclubber.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
that was so hot!
and then it was so beautiful.

awesome.

[identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com 2009-06-19 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it :D

[identity profile] trancer21.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 05:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, it's like you're on a fic writing roll!! I'm having a hard time keeping up.

If I am silk then she is wine; rich, smooth and intoxicating. I could drink her to death.

I really like this line. Actually, I really like that it's from Ivy's POV. Makes Rachel much more.. likable or, in Ivy's case, lickable!

[identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com 2009-06-19 06:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, it's like you're on a fic writing roll!! I'm having a hard time keeping up.

It's because school's almost out for summer! Yes! It's exam time, so I've had plenty of time to write while "supervising" exams. And yes, I am kind of chagrined to admit I wrote this, in between staring down grade nine's.

Actually, I really like that it's from Ivy's POV. Makes Rachel much more.. likable or, in Ivy's case, lickable!

lol! I know. Rachel's so much better when you can't hear her annoying thoughts. It makes Ivy's attraction to her seem much more understandable when you just see the kickass and don't have to hear the self-centered moaning and groaning.

[identity profile] kissxbullet.livejournal.com 2009-06-19 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
Very beautiful!

[identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com 2009-06-19 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it :D

[identity profile] madndizzee.livejournal.com 2009-06-22 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
very, very, very niiice. :D the title alone got me interested and the fic itself... mmmm... yummy. i like that Ivy lets Rachel have the power. it's good that they have as much power over each other.

happy day

[identity profile] writerwanabe.livejournal.com 2009-10-13 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
hot and beautiful.
thank you

w^2