Dude!! I was still thinking of what to say about your last Blade fic when *this* pops up! What I liked the most were the little touches that explained how their relationship got from 'there' to 'here'. Like, how Chase is willing to give Krista what Krista wants, and vice versa. To the little touch about Frederick and Chase's eventual acquiescence.
They had been at it for over an hour and had both come at least twice, but unless Chase got to sink her teeth into some part of her body she considered it coitus non grata.
Hee! That's so very, very Chase.
And, awww, Chase loves her boo. And, dude, Butchy Krista is *hawwttt!*!!
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Date: 2007-03-13 08:36 pm (UTC)They had been at it for over an hour and had both come at least twice, but unless Chase got to sink her teeth into some part of her body she considered it coitus non grata.
Hee! That's so very, very Chase.
And, awww, Chase loves her boo. And, dude, Butchy Krista is *hawwttt!*!!