Date: 2007-07-05 03:50 am (UTC)
I worshipped you Andie. Your body my alter, my cries of gratification, psalms of your greatness. But like all that is divine and revered, you perched yourself above us mere mortals. You fancied yourself our moral superiors and like all idyllic fools, found it necessary to prove it by renouncing our family, our name...everything we stand for. And for what Andie, for that unworthy piece of muggle filth? Who was truly made to suffer by your bold display of defiance?

I like it, I like the intensity and fanaticism of Bella's musings.

You could probably tone it down but just a notch as you said because the grandiose language works well for Bellatrix's character because she is kind of an insane drama queen, lol.

*hops with anticipation*
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