takes a puff)...i guess i did co-sign on this shit...j...j...j...goddamn!!...(catches breath)...geez to start...um how about here:
“You’ve been staring at me again, Prewett,” Bellatrix responded moving slightly to the side, her body completely blotting out the sun that had been shining on Molly, lording over the redhead like some dark, ancient goddess. “Didn’t your Blood Trash parents teach you that it’s rude to stare?”
Molly’s eyes narrowed and she turned her head to look up at Bellatrix defiantly, the insult to her family removing the caution with which she had begun to converse with the other girl.
“They did,” Molly responded meeting Bellatrix’s gaze. “They also taught me how to avoid dressing like a Bulgarian whore, which is a lesson your parents with all their refinement seem to have neglected.”
first off... the very thought of... a) the word "whore" coming out of the mouth of molly weasley and b) her noticing a chick, because let's face it after having 6 kids, she's no stranger to sperm, is both very amusing and delightful...
second, here is where you beautifully set up the reason why bella would even remotely be attracted to molly...very well done!
“Have you ever held your palm over an open flame?” Bellatrix asked softly before nuzzling her head against Molly’s, her lips brushing against the redhead’s ear again a second later, moving downwards until she could suck the lobe into her mouth... (and pretty much everything after it...)
this. blew. my. mind...because here is where we understand what drew molly in...and of course, it's just fantastic prose...you also do some incredible things w/ bella's character...i find myself deeply drawn to her because of how you frame her...you have fleshed her out so well, and i don't say this often, but it awes me just how well you are able get into her skin and this is further proof that...
i think by the time i got to the point that bella was having her way w/ molly, that i had this flash of "my summer of love" and how perfect would emily blunt and natalie press be as hogwarts girls gone wild?? and though i hated that movie, they were pretty hot and that just amped up the intensity of the whole piece...
you will make the most awesomest trophy wife ever!!... ;)
oh sweety, i have greatly enjoyed this, despite the fact this it is ooooh so wrong on soooo many levels...and just because you have delivered w/ a vengeance, i'm working on that little fic you double dog dared me to write and if i work diligently, i may have it ready by the weekend...i think this has pretty much lit a fire under my ass...and w/ that, i truly thank you for sharing your questionable morals w/ the rest of us.. :)
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Date: 2007-07-04 06:36 pm (UTC)“You’ve been staring at me again, Prewett,” Bellatrix responded moving slightly to the side, her body completely blotting out the sun that had been shining on Molly, lording over the redhead like some dark, ancient goddess. “Didn’t your Blood Trash parents teach you that it’s rude to stare?”
Molly’s eyes narrowed and she turned her head to look up at Bellatrix defiantly, the insult to her family removing the caution with which she had begun to converse with the other girl.
“They did,” Molly responded meeting Bellatrix’s gaze. “They also taught me how to avoid dressing like a Bulgarian whore, which is a lesson your parents with all their refinement seem to have neglected.”
first off... the very thought of... a) the word "whore" coming out of the mouth of molly weasley and b) her noticing a chick, because let's face it after having 6 kids, she's no stranger to sperm, is both very amusing and delightful...
second, here is where you beautifully set up the reason why bella would even remotely be attracted to molly...very well done!
“Have you ever held your palm over an open flame?” Bellatrix asked softly before nuzzling her head against Molly’s, her lips brushing against the redhead’s ear again a second later, moving downwards until she could suck the lobe into her mouth... (and pretty much everything after it...)
this. blew. my. mind...because here is where we understand what drew molly in...and of course, it's just fantastic prose...you also do some incredible things w/ bella's character...i find myself deeply drawn to her because of how you frame her...you have fleshed her out so well, and i don't say this often, but it awes me just how well you are able get into her skin and this is further proof that...
i think by the time i got to the point that bella was having her way w/ molly, that i had this flash of "my summer of love" and how perfect would emily blunt and natalie press be as hogwarts girls gone wild?? and though i hated that movie, they were pretty hot and that just amped up the intensity of the whole piece...
you will make the most awesomest trophy wife ever!!... ;)
oh sweety, i have greatly enjoyed this, despite the fact this it is ooooh so wrong on soooo many levels...and just because you have delivered w/ a vengeance, i'm working on that little fic you double dog dared me to write and if i work diligently, i may have it ready by the weekend...i think this has pretty much lit a fire under my ass...and w/ that, i truly thank you for sharing your questionable morals w/ the rest of us.. :)