I think you have a nice setup for a series going here. Cause Dan isn't THAT dumb, he has to know what's going on, at least an inkling. So sequel to a sequel perhaps? ;)
I really love this little verse within the GG maintext that you've created. It feels so real, and flows so smoothly that one would be hard pressed to not be able to easily envision any of these 'scenes' from taking place on the show itself. Brava, as always.
And extra bonus brownie points for slipping the ILY in there. I always am a sucker for those three words in fic. lol
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Date: 2007-10-20 05:41 am (UTC)I really love this little verse within the GG maintext that you've created. It feels so real, and flows so smoothly that one would be hard pressed to not be able to easily envision any of these 'scenes' from taking place on the show itself. Brava, as always.
And extra bonus brownie points for slipping the ILY in there. I always am a sucker for those three words in fic. lol