This is really lovely, and the characterisation feels really spot-on. I think it could have benefitted from a little more editing and less of 'the blonde' and 'the redhead' as ways to differentiate between the girls - it feels out-of-place - but I enjoy the insights into the girls one year on, and think you've captured the dynamic between Gemma and Felicity very well. Gemma/Felicity makes so much sense and I love how you've handled it here.
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Date: 2008-01-26 02:05 pm (UTC)