i agree with harper. you've got these two characters down, though that's no surprise considering your other fic.
i love the struggle over the word understanding in this fic. i think it's a great general theme for cameron, because understanding and intuiting can be very different things. it would be hard for cameron to actually achieve both.
i also like the idea of sarah being cameron's mission. i'm not sure i buy into completely, but it's a great thing for cameron to say. it could help to make sarah stronger in some ways.
great as always.
as as a post script to harpers, i love hermione/pansy, too!
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Date: 2008-02-07 01:14 am (UTC)i love the struggle over the word understanding in this fic. i think it's a great general theme for cameron, because understanding and intuiting can be very different things. it would be hard for cameron to actually achieve both.
i also like the idea of sarah being cameron's mission. i'm not sure i buy into completely, but it's a great thing for cameron to say. it could help to make sarah stronger in some ways.
great as always.
as as a post script to harpers, i love hermione/pansy, too!