I actually loved the ending, even though I understand other people wanting more. You have a great sense of pace and the dialogue was totally on point. And Leighton must say this line in real life:
"There had to be better choices ...much better choices. Actually, there could only have been better choices."
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That was absolutely perfect!
Date: 2008-05-12 03:30 am (UTC)"There had to be better choices ...much better choices. Actually, there could only have been better choices."
Looking forward to more.