I've just read this entire story back-to-back and all I can say is WOW! You write both characters beautifully and I love the sweet tenderness and affection between them. It's such a shame Stephenie Meyer doesn't just bump Edward off in a freak fishing accident and focus on Alice and Bella instead
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Brilliant!
Date: 2008-08-23 10:07 pm (UTC)Can't wait to read the next update!