love the chapter and the story as a whole actually :) it doesnt skim over some of the darker undertones that come with Alice controlling her blood lust but at the same time it's amazingly adorable. What Bella said about Edward treating her as a child in his efforts to protect her is totally true and a nice contrast to Alice.
However the sharing throws me off a little.. objectively Bella knows Jasper is being incredibly selfless and Alice obviously loves him but theres nothing objective about love, and i think sharing with the boys is a bad idea... vampires feel jealousy too after all- and that could get dangerous :)
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Date: 2008-09-17 03:43 am (UTC)love the chapter and the story as a whole actually :) it doesnt skim over some of the darker undertones that come with Alice controlling her blood lust but at the same time it's amazingly adorable. What Bella said about Edward treating her as a child in his efforts to protect her is totally true and a nice contrast to Alice.
However the sharing throws me off a little.. objectively Bella knows Jasper is being incredibly selfless and Alice obviously loves him but theres nothing objective about love, and i think sharing with the boys is a bad idea... vampires feel jealousy too after all- and that could get dangerous :)