I just had the day from hale, like this day would even depress Ferris Fucking Bueller, but this sooo made up for life.
This, this is perfect, from the banter to the sexin' to the afterglow, just win. And dom!Bella and Alice being all territorial of her bb = ridiculously HAWT. I do sense a little trouble on the horizon though, sharing being easier said than done and all.
What really amazes me about this chapter – and the entire fic really – is your incredible knack for detail, it just makes the story that much more real. Okay, end of gratuitous comment!sex.
…p.s - my Rosalie love just keeps growing, hope she makes another appearance
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Date: 2008-10-09 06:02 am (UTC)This, this is perfect, from the banter to the sexin' to the afterglow, just win. And dom!Bella and Alice being all territorial of her bb = ridiculously HAWT. I do sense a little trouble on the horizon though, sharing being easier said than done and all.
What really amazes me about this chapter – and the entire fic really – is your incredible knack for detail, it just makes the story that much more real. Okay, end of gratuitous comment!sex.
…p.s - my Rosalie love just keeps growing, hope she makes another appearance