SO. MUCH. GREATNESS!!!! I loved EVERYTHING from Bella trying to pretend to be a badass, to Emily serving her a mug of hot chocolate, to everyone calling Alice 'the tiny female' but most of all: i LOVED ADORED ---a bunch of other words meaning the same---how you wrote Alice's desperation to see Bella (despite that it was part of the plan to meet up later at an assigned location). But OH MY GOD! the way you WROTE IT, it just-- i dont even know, it's like you could FEEL it from the reader's Point of View and HOLY CRAP YESSSSS!!!!TO EDWARD CATCHING ON AND PLANNING ON GETTING LOST!!! As much as i've enjoyed Jasper being such a great sport during this whole thing- i think he's getting the fact that Alice belongs to Bella and visaversa now *nod* i dont have the proper word to tell you just how amazingly well this was written so i'm going to stop rambling now ---cept for: MORE PLEASE!!!!
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Date: 2008-11-16 07:30 am (UTC)I loved EVERYTHING from Bella trying to pretend to be a badass, to Emily serving her a mug of hot chocolate, to everyone calling Alice 'the tiny female'
but most of all: i LOVED ADORED ---a bunch of other words meaning the same---how you wrote Alice's desperation to see Bella (despite that it was part of the plan to meet up later at an assigned location). But OH MY GOD! the way you WROTE IT, it just-- i dont even know, it's like you could FEEL it from the reader's Point of View
and
HOLY CRAP YESSSSS!!!!TO EDWARD CATCHING ON AND PLANNING ON GETTING LOST!!!
As much as i've enjoyed Jasper being such a great sport during this whole thing- i think he's getting the fact that Alice belongs to Bella and visaversa now *nod*
i dont have the proper word to tell you just how amazingly well this was written so i'm going to stop rambling now
---cept for:
MORE PLEASE!!!!