That had me like swooning, srsly I had to pause for like 2 minutes just to get over your and Alice's awesome.
*glares at Bella ... mutters luckybish ... glares some more* Seriously though, Alice makes me swoon all the time so I'm happy to be able to pass the touch of the vapours onto others :D
Glad Charlie finally put some of his detective logic to work and figured it out, and he gets a gold star for being so awesome about everything.
lol, yeah, months later he's finally like ... "something suspicious is going on here!". Though in his defense, most of the really gay stuff happened in Bella's room after he'd gone to sleep. But out of his defense ... they were pretty gay even without 'the really gay stuff', lol
Also, I just couldn't conceive of a scenario where he would like lose his shit and curse at Bella and throw Bella out. That's not Charlie. Despite his stoic manliness, he loves that girl.
Thank God Edward's gone, but you actually had me feeling sympathetic for him at the end there.
I figured I'd give him a decent send off after heaping the endless angst on him. I mean the situation does kind of suck. Still, he's a douche bag and didn't deserve Bella, so things ended as they should have.
Anyway, can't wait to see what Renee thinks of Alice, that ought to be fun.
Next chapter, bb! Next chapter :D
P.S. [annoying fangirl]Is the next chapter of yours going to be up soon? I'm going into withdrawal. I need moar 'Twilight ... written well with good characterization, dialogue, and romantic pairings' *shivers ... sweats*[/annoying fangirl]
P.S. Your icon = UNF! Side-boob! [perv]Ashley's really got a nice rack on her for a small gal[/perv]
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Date: 2008-11-26 04:37 pm (UTC)*glares at Bella ... mutters luckybish ... glares some more* Seriously though, Alice makes me swoon all the time so I'm happy to be able to pass the touch of the vapours onto others :D
Glad Charlie finally put some of his detective logic to work and figured it out, and he gets a gold star for being so awesome about everything.
lol, yeah, months later he's finally like ... "something suspicious is going on here!". Though in his defense, most of the really gay stuff happened in Bella's room after he'd gone to sleep. But out of his defense ... they were pretty gay even without 'the really gay stuff', lol
Also, I just couldn't conceive of a scenario where he would like lose his shit and curse at Bella and throw Bella out. That's not Charlie. Despite his stoic manliness, he loves that girl.
Thank God Edward's gone, but you actually had me feeling sympathetic for him at the end there.
I figured I'd give him a decent send off after heaping the endless angst on him. I mean the situation does kind of suck. Still, he's a douche bag and didn't deserve Bella, so things ended as they should have.
Anyway, can't wait to see what Renee thinks of Alice, that ought to be fun.
Next chapter, bb! Next chapter :D
P.S. [annoying fangirl]Is the next chapter of yours going to be up soon? I'm going into withdrawal. I need moar 'Twilight ... written well with good characterization, dialogue, and romantic pairings' *shivers ... sweats*[/annoying fangirl]
P.S. Your icon = UNF! Side-boob! [perv]Ashley's really got a nice rack on her for a small gal[/perv]