Ohh there was sooo much good stuff in this chapter.. where do I start? I loved that Alice and Renee got along so well and that Renee picked up the vibe right away *g*
I would have loved to see them go to that club. Alice dancing *yummy*
And then the whole training part, I would love to see more of Alice's vampire side, but it's your story. Just wishful thinking on my end *g*
But as I was saying, the training was really great. I think 10 minutes is a lot of time! She's really making progress.
And the conversation with Carlisle *snicker* That should be interesting...
So now I'm finished and can't wait for the next part!
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Date: 2008-12-05 06:53 pm (UTC)I loved that Alice and Renee got along so well and that Renee picked up the vibe right away *g*
I would have loved to see them go to that club. Alice dancing *yummy*
And then the whole training part, I would love to see more of Alice's vampire side, but it's your story. Just wishful thinking on my end *g*
But as I was saying, the training was really great. I think 10 minutes is a lot of time! She's really making progress.
And the conversation with Carlisle *snicker*
That should be interesting...
So now I'm finished and can't wait for the next part!