Yes it was insanely hot. It's just that I like the stuff that happens inside their heads more than what happens inside their bodies. There needs to be the right kind of emotion and love, in order for the story to blow my mind. More plot and story. More talking and less sexing. Personal preference. Not telling how you should write. Just saying what I like. It's still one of the best Ravy ever written.
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Date: 2009-01-22 07:54 am (UTC)