I was wondering when Alice would make an appearance!
After ODW there was no way I couldn't have Alice appear. The woman is comedy gold. I heart her muchly.
You managed to include such a wide range of emotions in one chapter alone, and the awkward but hilarious situation with Rachel's mom at the end was just the perfect topper.
I'm glad it wasn't too jarring. I was worried that it would be like whiplash from the relative seriousness at the beginning, to like the whack comedy hijinks at the end. I'm glad that it worked out :D
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Date: 2009-02-06 10:32 pm (UTC)After ODW there was no way I couldn't have Alice appear. The woman is comedy gold. I heart her muchly.
You managed to include such a wide range of emotions in one chapter alone, and the awkward but hilarious situation with Rachel's mom at the end was just the perfect topper.
I'm glad it wasn't too jarring. I was worried that it would be like whiplash from the relative seriousness at the beginning, to like the whack comedy hijinks at the end. I'm glad that it worked out :D
Also, 3/5 now, eh? AWESOME
Yeah, it just keeps on going! lol