Ohmygoodness. Your writing is so incredibly powerful and and heartbreaking. I feel bad for Jasper, and Alice, and Bella. Because you can tell that all of them just had their hearts shattered.
Like, yes, Jasper is gone and heartbroken and so that makes Alice depressed, but it also must be excruciatingly painful for Bella watching Alice mourn over a lover that isn't her, and to not be able to at least help Alice in any way.
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Date: 2009-02-08 08:19 pm (UTC)I feel bad for Jasper, and Alice, and Bella. Because you can tell that all of them just had their hearts shattered.
Like, yes, Jasper is gone and heartbroken and so that makes Alice depressed, but it also must be excruciatingly painful for Bella watching Alice mourn over a lover that isn't her, and to not be able to at least help Alice in any way.
*sighs* You kill me!
*sits patiently* Can't wait for moooore. :]