Oooo, great fic. You have captured them so well. Hopefully this will be looooooong fic.
And now, because I am ever so nitpicky, 'Shah Mat' does not mean 'the king is dead' it means the king is helpless or defeated or any number of synonymous things, but definitely not 'dead'.
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Date: 2011-09-02 10:28 pm (UTC)And now, because I am ever so nitpicky, 'Shah Mat' does not mean 'the king is dead' it means the king is helpless or defeated or any number of synonymous things, but definitely not 'dead'.
Still, great, great fic, like yours always are :D