*sighs* In my mind, this is the real Hollows and the stuff Kim H. puts out is just bad fan fiction!
I love your writing. I could really feel Rachel's nervousness during the dinner and worse Ivy's hurt and exhaustion due to the whole Rachel situation. I almost wanted to smack Rachel when she didn't admit to Ivy her real feelings the first time Ivy asked.
And I really liked this line: "everything. And I freely give you all of me" because that's what I usually imagine myself saying to Ivy before she whisks me away to her bedroom. lol TMI?
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THANK YOU!
Date: 2010-03-04 02:17 am (UTC)I love your writing. I could really feel Rachel's nervousness during the dinner and worse Ivy's hurt and exhaustion due to the whole Rachel situation. I almost wanted to smack Rachel when she didn't admit to Ivy her real feelings the first time Ivy asked.
And I really liked this line: "everything. And I freely give you all of me" because that's what I usually imagine myself saying to Ivy before she whisks me away to her bedroom. lol TMI?
Thank you for not making us wait too long!