This was just beautiful. FINALLY Rachel is makin' some smart decisions...too bad this isn't the books [but let's all just secretly pretend it is so that we don't go bald with ripping our hair out]. This was just so well done. The dialogue. The characterization. The epiphony. The writing fluidity. Choice of words. I could go on and on...
That little question mark in the title just makes my heart do little flips. Can't wait for more!
Also: I see you've let out some of your Pierce frustration in Rachel's character in this story...good job. I would have done the same, lol.
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Date: 2010-03-05 10:49 pm (UTC)That little question mark in the title just makes my heart do little flips. Can't wait for more!
Also: I see you've let out some of your Pierce frustration in Rachel's character in this story...good job. I would have done the same, lol.