I wish you knew just how much my heart skipped a beat when I visited your lj and saw that you have another Talia/Gerta fic published.
*post-reading thoughts*
I wish you knew just how much I fall in love with you and your writing at the end of every story. EVERY. SINGLE. TIME.
~~~
You've done it again, creating a word portrait of a character into an expanded alt universe while capturing its essence to the core! :) (Seriously, fandoms [and by extension, we/fangirls] are very fortunate to have you. You discover a fandom/pairing that piques your interest, and that fandom is changed for good by the high quality fics your brilliant creative mind conjures. Esp this fandom, who probably only has a handful of lady-lovin' fangirls, which is a terrible shame *smh*]
Everything was in this fic and then some: Lemme count the ways! :)
1) Sexytimes! (Have I ever told you your R/NC17 bits have the perfect blend of sensuality and hotness without being crude? To me, when you write R/NC17, sex is not merely sex but more on the spectrum end of love-making or connecting with another person physically, per nature of the char you are writing. Like your Cara/Dahlia fics I would like to marry someday... LOL!)
2) Practical "married" couple talks involving money (I love how they are such as couple that they could talk about mundane things such as money matters without awkwardness. I agree with your line of thinking here; I mean, no good wine will be dirt cheap it will be free and unlimited everytime. And what are these articles of clothing you were talking about? Pics or it didn't happen! LOL!)
3) Eloping! (Oh my god, I died from the cuteness of this exchange! :D )
"Fine," Gerta sighed, not willing to even joke about not loving Talia enough to do anything in her power to be with her. "I'll move to Morova with you. But I'm going to be grumpy," she warned.
"Tyberus it is then," Talia replied smiling. "I'd rather fight Persite giant sand worms than deal with you when you're grumpy," she continued, laughing when Gerta glared at her and then angling her body away when Gerta reached out to smack her.
4) Peeling off another Talia emotional brick wall. You have handled this very beautifully and I had tears in my eyes as I witness this scene unravel in my minds-eye. I dont even have the apt words for how much this bit moved me, but I had tears in my eyes I'm telling you... *How do you have the power to move me this much?*
Thank you so much for writing this and for sharing this with us. My fangirl heart is always so enriched and full of joy after reading your fics. :)
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Date: 2012-04-19 02:20 am (UTC)I wish you knew just how much my heart skipped a beat when I visited your lj and saw that you have another Talia/Gerta fic published.
*post-reading thoughts*
I wish you knew just how much I fall in love with you and your writing at the end of every story. EVERY. SINGLE. TIME.
~~~
You've done it again, creating a word portrait of a character into an expanded alt universe while capturing its essence to the core! :) (Seriously, fandoms [and by extension, we/fangirls] are very fortunate to have you. You discover a fandom/pairing that piques your interest, and that fandom is changed for good by the high quality fics your brilliant creative mind conjures. Esp this fandom, who probably only has a handful of lady-lovin' fangirls, which is a terrible shame *smh*]
Everything was in this fic and then some: Lemme count the ways! :)
1) Sexytimes! (Have I ever told you your R/NC17 bits have the perfect blend of sensuality and hotness without being crude? To me, when you write R/NC17, sex is not merely sex but more on the spectrum end of love-making or connecting with another person physically, per nature of the char you are writing. Like your Cara/Dahlia fics I would like to marry someday... LOL!)
2) Practical "married" couple talks involving money (I love how they are such as couple that they could talk about mundane things such as money matters without awkwardness. I agree with your line of thinking here; I mean, no good wine will be dirt cheap it will be free and unlimited everytime. And what are these articles of clothing you were talking about? Pics or it didn't happen! LOL!)
3) Eloping! (Oh my god, I died from the cuteness of this exchange! :D )
"Fine," Gerta sighed, not willing to even joke about not loving Talia enough to do anything in her power to be with her. "I'll move to Morova with you. But I'm going to be grumpy," she warned.
"Tyberus it is then," Talia replied smiling. "I'd rather fight Persite giant sand worms than deal with you when you're grumpy," she continued, laughing when Gerta glared at her and then angling her body away when Gerta reached out to smack her.
4) Peeling off another Talia emotional brick wall. You have handled this very beautifully and I had tears in my eyes as I witness this scene unravel in my minds-eye. I dont even have the apt words for how much this bit moved me, but I had tears in my eyes I'm telling you... *How do you have the power to move me this much?*
Thank you so much for writing this and for sharing this with us. My fangirl heart is always so enriched and full of joy after reading your fics. :)
-Xam