OMG! o_O. I take it all back about the lack of long fics on LJ cause this was a nice long update. I now see the error of my ways. This fic is seriously delicious. I love the way you write dialogue so much.
“It’s outlandishly tasty,” ... “Yummy,” That whole exchange is so irresistibly cute and flirtatious.
Jean and Emma went oddly silent once more, obviously holding one of the private conversations they’d been having all night. It's like Jean is not fully aware that her level of intimacy with Emma is growing but we get to see it through the going back and forth between telepathic and normal speech.
And the making out: unbelievable hotness! And Emma was just amazingly well behaved at how it turned out.
Please update soon cause right now: cliffhanger. Pretty please.
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Date: 2006-05-25 12:52 am (UTC)I take it all back about the lack of long fics on LJ cause this was a nice long update. I now see the error of my ways.
This fic is seriously delicious. I love the way you write dialogue so much.
“It’s outlandishly tasty,” ...
“Yummy,” That whole exchange is so irresistibly cute and flirtatious.
Jean and Emma went oddly silent once more, obviously holding one of the private conversations they’d been having all night.
It's like Jean is not fully aware that her level of intimacy with Emma is growing but we get to see it through the going back and forth between telepathic and normal speech.
And the making out: unbelievable hotness! And Emma was just amazingly well behaved at how it turned out.
Please update soon cause right now: cliffhanger. Pretty please.