When did Nikki tell Claire her son's name was Micah.........BEFORE Claire said his name?
That's a good point I hadn't noticed. I'd had her say his name in a previous draft but the line got rearranged and that was cut out. I didn't notice it during the final edit.
there are some innaccuracies in your story.........those that fall into "spoilers"
I'm not sure what those inaccuracies were (unless it was describing Niki's car as a Lebaran because I know nothing about cars) but I'd be interested to know since I try to get facts as straight as possible while still allowing the story to exist (ex. I know nowhere in the pilot was it implied that either of them liked girls, but this is a femslash story so they do).
Reading back over it I can't see anything that contradicts the pilot so if you could point it out I'd be appreciated as something to keep in mind for any future Heroes stories I write.
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Date: 2006-07-20 07:25 pm (UTC)That's a good point I hadn't noticed. I'd had her say his name in a previous draft but the line got rearranged and that was cut out. I didn't notice it during the final edit.
there are some innaccuracies in your story.........those that fall into "spoilers"
I'm not sure what those inaccuracies were (unless it was describing Niki's car as a Lebaran because I know nothing about cars) but I'd be interested to know since I try to get facts as straight as possible while still allowing the story to exist (ex. I know nowhere in the pilot was it implied that either of them liked girls, but this is a femslash story so they do).
Reading back over it I can't see anything that contradicts the pilot so if you could point it out I'd be appreciated as something to keep in mind for any future Heroes stories I write.