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Title: The Art of Seduction
Author: Janine
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Bellatrix/Narcissa/Andromeda
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don’t own them I’m just borrowing them.
Warning: Blackcest
Thanks to:[info]amluv  who originally gave me the idea for a jealous!narcissa fic a way long time ago, and[info]bank_farter for unknowingly igniting my interest in blackcest again and giving me the boost I needed to finish this piece!

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Andromeda smiled widely her head tilting back as she laughed giving Bellatrix better access to her neck, a moan issuing from her lips a few moments later as Bellatrix’s hands trailed up from her hips to cup her breasts.

Narcissa watched her sister’s, her hands balling into fists, her eyes narrowing and her jaw clenching as she stared unblinkingly at the scene unfolding in front of her. It wasn’t the first time she had caught her sister’s in such a position, but it lanced her the same way it had that first time she had happened upon them laughing and touching in some forgotten corner of the house.

Taking a deep, steadying breath Narcissa turned away from her sister’s and headed out of the study walking slowly back towards the living room where the guests were gathered. She’d been sent to locate her siblings who Druella had noticed were absent when they sat down for tea. She’d tell her mother that Andromeda wasn’t feeling well and Bellatrix was taking care of her. Only as Narcissa entered the sitting room again, she decided that she had best switch the story around. It likely would have made Druella suspicious to place Bella in the role of care-giver, and even though her sister’s didn’t see fit to include her in their fun, she knew better than to ruin it.

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Two days later …

Narcissa stared at herself in the candlelight watching in her large mirror as the light danced over the pale, elegant planes of her body. She ran her hands over her breasts, cupping them for a few seconds enjoying the warm weight of them, and then she drew her hands down her stomach and around her hips to travel over the soft globes of her ass, all the while tilting her head from side to side looking at her face and body from every angle.

It was confirmed … she was stunning.

Narcissa sighed and turned away from the mirror in a huff, reaching roughly for her nightgown and pulling it viciously over her head before moving over to bed and flopping down on it.

She had checked and she was flawless …as she had already known. She could make boys tent their robes just by walking by them at Hogwarts. In the Slytherin showers she saw the other girl’s from her class glare at her enviously as she bathed, water droplets cascading down the perfectly formed, delicate plains of her body, some of their eyes burning with desire as well as jealousy. She was gorgeous and everyone responded to her in one way or another whether it was a desire to be with her or be as beautiful as her.

It was confirmed … she was extremely desirable.

Moaning in frustration, Narcissa flipped over onto her stomach and buried her face in her pillow, screaming into it loudly a second later though only a muffled sound could be heard in the room before she turned onto her back again and whipped the pillow out from beneath her, flinging it across the room in a rage.

She was just as beautiful as Andromeda, maybe even more so. It could not be disputed. And that being the case she simply couldn’t understand, just could not fathom why Bellatrix didn’t want touch her too.

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The next night …

Bellatrix paused as she entered her room aware of something different about the space the moment she entered it. Someone had been inside without her knowledge, she was sure of it. She stared into the darkness for a moment wondering who would’ve been foolish enough to invade her personal space and then her lips parted and she spoke softly, the torches in her room flickering to life immediately.

“Humph,” Bellatrix murmured as her room was illuminated, her eyes landing on her bed, studying the figure occupying it. “Hello darling,” Bellatrix said softly a moment later moving towards the bed, her eyes locked on the pale figure in front of her.

“Hello Bella,” Narcissa replied quietly her throat dry. She was nervous even though she had planned this. Bellatrix could be somewhat unpredictable and she wasn’t quite sure how her sister was going to react to her, though she knew how she wanted her to react.

“You seem to be quite forgetful today,” Bellatrix commented lightly taking a seat on the edge of her bed, her eyes still on Narcissa as she spoke. “You’ve forgotten where your room is and … it would seem, your clothes,” she continued her eyes traveling over her sister’s nude body.

“I’ve forgotten nothing,” Narcissa responded her eyes sharp as they meet Bellatrix’s. “You’re the one with the memory problem.”

Bellatrix lifted an amused eyebrow at this. “Is that so, Cissy dear? And what is it that I’ve forgotten?”

“It would seem that it often slips your mind that you have two sisters,” Narcissa responded her voice cooling a little as she remembered the scene she had stumbled upon between Bellatrix and Andromeda a few days before. “You only ever seem to remember to play with the one,” she continued a silver of anger apparent in her tone. “So I sought to remind you that there is another who desires your affection as well.”

“Ah,” Bellatrix said smiling, laughing lightly a few seconds later. “This is a seduction then?” she asked, her eyes roving over Narcissa anew.

“I shouldn’t have to seduce you at all,” Narcissa grumbled pouting. “I mean, look at me,” she continued running her hands down her body. “How could you not come and take this?” she asked petulantly though she noticed with satisfaction that Bellatrix was looking at her. “But yes, since it seems you needed an invitation … here I am,” Narcissa finished laying back artfully against the pillows she had arranged, offering herself up to Bellatrix’s eyes and whatever else her sister had to offer.

“This is not a game Cissy,” Bellatrix said carefully, lifting her eyes from the perfection of Narcissa’s body for a moment so that she could see her eyes. “This gift once given cannot be returned,” she continued her eyes boring into Narcissa’s making the blonde shiver. “Once you are mine,” Bellatrix drawled smiling wolfishly, “you … are … mine,” she went on punctuating each word. “I will not give you up.”

Narcissa shivered again under her sister’s eyes, Bellatrix’s words coursing through her leaving a trail of liquid heat in their wake.

“I am yours,” Narcissa said finally her chin tilted up proudly though her voice shook slightly. “I’ve always been yours. All that’s left is for you to … take me.”

Bellatrix bit down on her bottom lip, chewing on it softly for a moment as she looked up at Narcissa through lovely dark eyelashes, and then she smiled.

“So be it.”

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Narcissa’s chest rose and fell deeply, her eyes trained on Bellatrix’s face, gazing up at her as her sister moved up the bed until she was lying along side Narcissa’s body.

“I shan’t be gentle,” Bellatrix said in a disconcertingly gentle tone of voice.

“No,” Narcissa breathed out. “I … I didn’t think you’d be,” she continued half sighing as she spoke, tiny tremors running through her slim frame once more.

Bellatrix smiled and reached out for the blonde, a soft laugh escaping her lips when Narcissa’s whole body twitched at the press of her palm against the blonde’s stomach.

“Didn’t think or hoped, Cissy?” Bellatrix asked a playful lilt to her voice as she looked over at Narcissa curiously.

Narcissa smiled back, her body relaxing a little as Bellatrix absently stroked her stomach.

“Hoped,” she admitted looking at Bellatrix coquettishly through her lashes.

“What a sick, perverted little creature you are,” Bellatrix responded highly amused lifting her hand from Narcissa’s stomach and bringing it up to her sister’s face, tapping Narcissa playfully on the nose a moment later before returning her hand to its previous position.

“Perfect to play with,” Narcissa whispered tension coiling inside of her as she awaited the firm, rough touches Bellatrix had promised her earlier. She knew the calm that existed between them at the moment would not last. She could feel the energy building up within Bellatrix and knew that soon it would be unleashed upon her. But not knowing exactly when Bella’s touches would turn into something else left her anxious … and aching.

“Such an expensive and delicate little toy,” Bellatrix replied her fingers trailing lazily up the side of Narcissa’s torso as an appreciative smile played across her lips.

Narcissa gasped as she suddenly felt Bellatrix’s lips pressed against her, the movement so swift she didn’t even detect it until her sister’s lips were upon her. Bellatrix tongue slipped into her mouth as soon as her lips parted, the eldest Black sister taking immediate possession of Narcissa’s mouth and the kiss, the caress rough and demanding as Bellatrix’s hand closed over Narcissa’s breast, palming the warm mound.

Helplessly, Narcissa’s body began to arch, pushing up into Bellatrix’s hand as her legs twisted on the mattress and her hands moved out in search of Bellatrix’s body grasping desperately at any part of her sister that she could reach.

“What an … eager beaver,” Bellatrix breathed out against Narcissa’s lips, her fingers pressing between Narcissa’s twisting thighs and resting there against the warm dampness of her sisters sex.

Narcissa mewled, biting down on her lip in a way that had to be painful as her eyes met Bellatrix’s hotly, a soft pitiful sound emerging from her throat when Bellatrix pulled her fingers from between her legs.

The next sound to emerge from Narcissa was a startled gasp as Bellatrix placed her hands on the blonde’s thighs and pushed them roughly apart and up, Narcissa breathing in deeply with pain at the suddenness and force with which her limbs were moved.

However, before she could whine or whimper Bellatrix was positioned between her legs, her face hovering just over Narcissa’s sex. She didn’t stay immobile for long, just long enough for Narcissa to process what was happening and what was about to happen, and then Bellatrix lowered her head.

Bellatrix’s tongue was ravenous, devouring the blonde’s sex as a nomad who had been wandering through the dessert for days without water would have gorged himself at the first pond he came upon. She licked the length of Narcissa’s sex in long, firm strokes, pressing her face into Narcissa as her tongue swirled around the blonde’s clit occasionally sucking it into her mouth and nibbling on it with her teeth before licking Narcissa eagerly again and repeating the process.

“When you masturbate do you penetrate yourself?”

Narcissa blinked, her chest rising and falling rapidly as she stared up at Bellatrix’s glistening face. At any other time she should have made some joke about her sister needing a bib, but knowing where the wetness coating Bellatrix’s lips and chin had come from Narcissa could do no more than whimper and buck, her eyes fluttering as she felt more of that same wetness escape from inside of her.

“No,” Narcissa said softly somehow finding the internal resources to be able to speak.

Bellatrix was perfectly still as she looked down at Narcissa after the blonde had spoken, not even blinking, simply prone and staring for what seemed an outlandishly long time to Narcissa and then Bellatrix sighed, her body shuddering slightly as her eyes closed for a few seconds and then opened once more.

“Perfect,” Bellatrix said softly a few seconds after her eyes opened her voice rough.

And then Bellatrix’s hand was between her legs once more, her fingers stroking along the length of her as her sister lowered her wet mouth to Narcissa’s chest, her lips closing over a hard pink nipple, worrying it with her teeth and tongue as her fingers stroked incessantly between the blonde’s legs.

Narcissa’s eyes squeezed shut as Bellatrix took possession of her body, her head falling against and digging into the pillow behind her as her fingers clawed and scratched at her sister’s robed back, her hips canting up into Bellatrix’s hand as she pressed her chest forward begging Bellatrix to take more and more of her.

Bellatrix’s mouth stilled against Narcissa’s breast, her eyelids fluttering in ecstasy as she pushed a finger inside of the blonde, her pelvis pressing down against the mattress as Narcissa’s chocked cry reached her ears.

Bellatrix pressed her face into Narcissa’s bosom, moving her head from side to side, nuzzling against the blonde, trying to burrow into her chest as her pulled her finger out of Narcissa and plunged it in again, pulling out and then entering her again and again as her teeth nipped at the skin of the valley between Narcissa’s breasts.

Narcissa’s hand moved to Bellatrix’s head her fingers tangling in her sister’s dark hair as the pain gave way to pleasure, her lips parted and her hand holding Bellatrix tight against her bosom as her hips bucked up, strangled, excited sounds coming from her as Bellatrix added another finger, and then another.

“Bella,” Narcissa called her orgasm bubbling up inside of her. “Bella,” she called again knowing that she wouldn’t last very much longer. “Bella!” she cried again and then she was coming, her hips vibrating as pleasure wracked her body, her fingers pulling at Bellatrix’s hair in a way the brunette found quite enjoyable as waves of satisfaction rolled through Narcissa’s lithe body.

Narcissa collapsed heavily against the mattress, her limbs heavy as lead.

“Hmm,” Bellatrix hummed thoughtfully, her fingers still buried inside of Narcissa as she moved up the blonde’s body to lie beside her once more, a fond smile touching her lips as Narcissa immediately rolled into the warmth of her body.

Bellatrix curled her free arm around Narcissa’s body holding her for a moment before letting her fingers dance against her sister’s skin in a pantomime of a puppeteer manipulating their creation. “It seems I’ve snapped all your strings,” Bellatrix said regretfully still hugging her sister’s wilted form.

Narcissa smiled pressing her face into Bellatrix’s neck. “No strings,” she murmured softly, content, her body humming happily. “You just need to wind me up again.”

Bellatrix laughed airily. “Perhaps I’ll let my assistant take care of that,” the eldest Black sister responded happily staring out into the depths of her torch lit room. “A reward for the helpful silencing charm she cast just in time to keep Mummy and Daddy from beating down my door to save you.”

“What?” Narcissa asked lifting her head with great effort only to find that Bellatrix wasn’t looking at her even though her hand was still tenderly stroking her. Instead her sister was staring off into the depths of her room.

Narcissa twisted slightly, her eyes following Bellatrix’s gaze, a surprised gasp coming from her a second later.

“What are you doing here?” Narcissa asked scowling, her eyes narrowing as Andromeda began to move towards the bed.

“You were supposed to meet me,” Andromeda said lightly, ignoring Narcissa entirely as she stared at Bellatrix.

“Cissy had other plans,” Bellatrix responded. “She seduced me,” Bellatrix added confidentially a few seconds later, her voice lowering as if she was sharing a secret of the utmost delicacy and importance.

“I told you she was watching,” Andromeda said taking a seat on the edge of the bed.

“So she was,” Bellatrix agreed kissing Narcissa’s forehead after she spoke.

“So,” Andromeda began crossing her legs delicately, her palm moving to rest on the mattress to support her weight as she leaned back casually her eyes finally landing on Narcissa. “Can I play too?”

Bellatrix smiled widely her body jittering against Narcissa’s with happiness.

“Fine,” Narcissa sighed though she eyed Andromeda appreciatively, not nearly as anger with her middle sister now as she had been when she thought Bellatrix preferred Andromeda to her. “But I’m the puppeteer.”

“Tonight at least,” Andromeda replied smiling before she stood up and reached behind her, her robes falling to the ground a moment after that. She then joined her sisters on the bed, presenting herself to them much as Narcissa had presented herself to Bellatrix earlier. “Two cats … so unfair, what’s a little mouse to do?”

Narcissa looked at Bellatrix who smiled and nodded and then turned to look down at Andromeda, settling herself along her middle sister’s side, lording over her as Bellatrix had done to her. She knew exactly what Bellatrix would say in her position.

“Why, be devoured of course,” Narcissa purred enjoying the way Andromeda’s eyes hooded as she breathed in deeply.

However, as Andromeda’s eyes briefly flickered behind her to Bellatrix a knowing and slightly triumphant look passing between them before Andromeda returned her eyes returned to Narcissa’s giving Narcissa the distinct feeling that it had actually been her who was seduced.

The End

Date: 2008-01-07 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ohecstasy.livejournal.com
Genius. Pure fucking genius.

Date: 2008-01-09 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Aw, thanks so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I heart blackcest muchly ;)

Date: 2008-01-09 11:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ohecstasy.livejournal.com
Blackcest is a gift to the world, haha. ;D

Date: 2008-01-07 03:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shallyshilly.livejournal.com
Oh, the twist at the end was good.
Not my cup of tea pairing-wise, but excellently written. I love the jealousy and closeness of the sisters (even if I don't really believe Andromeda would be like that).

Date: 2008-01-09 03:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it even if the pairing wasn't your thing.

you're right about Andromeda as well, I knew she was a bit OOC as I wrote the end, but my pervy mind wanted to get her in there and I couldn't resist the twist at the end ;)

Date: 2008-01-07 05:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pickzee.livejournal.com
I started following your journal for your wonderful Waldsen and find that you write Blackcest as well. Excellent fic.

Date: 2008-01-09 03:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Blackcest is best! I totally love Blackcest, I was totally obsessed with it in the summer and then Waldsen stole my attention, but I couldn't stay away from the Black sisters for too long ;)

I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2008-01-07 07:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lettersandsodas.livejournal.com
Niiiice. I'm a little ashamed to admit how much I like Blackcest, but you write it so well that I can't resist comment. :) I especially enjoy the more formal voice you have for Bella here. It's very... appealing.

Date: 2008-01-09 03:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
I'm a little ashamed to admit how much I like Blackcest

lol, embrace it! Blackcest is best! Blackcest is best! Wallow in the depravity with me, lol

I especially enjoy the more formal voice you have for Bella here. It's very... appealing.

I'm glad you liked it, it was a bit different then I usually write her. But there was something extremely hot about knowing how batshit crazy she is under all of that eloquence. I don't know why, it just is ;)

Date: 2008-01-07 08:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jello-o.livejournal.com
It's 3am and I have to work at 7am, yet, here I am, reading your addictive and fantastic fic. I thought you stopped writing blackcest but thank god you didn't.

Date: 2008-01-09 03:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
My apologies for your sleepy morning. I feel your pain though, I stayed up way too late writing it, lol.

I got side-tracked with Gossip Girl fic for a while, but Blackcest holds a special place in my heart. I'll always come back to it *le sigh*

Date: 2008-01-07 01:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greenovalfruit.livejournal.com
Wow. Who knew incest could be so much fun? Now I look forward to the beginning of the next movie all the more, so I can have a face for Narcissa. I had my own, of course, but I much prefer HBC to Bellatrix and all...
Anyway, you're a goddess.

Date: 2008-01-09 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Who knew incest could be so much fun?

*raises hand* lol, I joke. I know, it's crazy how much fun incest is when it involves the Black sisters. That family is the embodiment of so wrong it's right, lol.

Now I look forward to the beginning of the next movie all the more, so I can have a face for Narcissa

I'm getting really scared, I haven't heard of them casting anyone for Narcissa yet *sobs* They HAVE to have Narcissa in it, I'll be beyond bitter is they don't. I've been waiting to see Narcissa on screen for years, plus Spinner's End is so blackcest-y. Hopefully, they're just trying to keep it a surprise.

Thanks for writing, I'm glad that you enjoyed it :D

Date: 2008-01-09 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pickzee.livejournal.com
According to this site (http://www.cinematical.com/2007/07/24/naomi-watts-signs-to-play-narcissa-malfoy-in-harry-potter-6/) they cast Naomi Watts as Narcissa for HBP. It looks valid, though I'm surprised there wasn't a little more press about it.

Date: 2008-01-09 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
I think that was debunked :( Mugglenet and MTV and a couple other places had reported her casting in the summer as well, and then about a week after they announced it they retracted it because Naomi's people denied that she had been cast.

Since then I haven't heard much news. After Naomi people were speculating about Joely Richardson and then that died down too and I haven't heard anything about Narcissa casting since *tear*

Date: 2008-01-09 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pickzee.livejournal.com
I just searched again to double check and The Leaky Cauldron posted yesterday that Helen McCroy (http://www.the-leaky-cauldron.org/2008/1/8/helen-mccrory-to-begin-filming-role-as-narcissa-malfoy-in-half-blood-prince) will play her. All the pictures I've seen of her have dark hair, so I'm hoping she can pull off Malfoy blonde.

In my mind, Nicole Kidman will probably always be my image of the ultimate Narcissa.

Date: 2008-01-09 11:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Yeah, I just saw that news too. I'm sure she's a fine actress but I kind of hate her casting. There just doesn't seem to be anything terribly Narcissa-like about her at all.

Michelle Pfeiffer (or a Mrs. Coulter-esque Nicole Kidman, mmmm) will always be my dream Narcissa. (And Saffron Burrows my dream Andromeda, but we'll probably never see her on screen ... or at least played by an actress anyone knows since she has like one line in DH)

Date: 2008-01-09 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Ahhh, after you posted this I went to imdb and they've listed Helen McCrory as Narcissa (she's the actress that had first been cast as Bellatrix!)

Good news this morning as CBBC Newsround can confirm some casting news for “Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince.” Actress Helen McCrory will play the part of Narcissa Malfoy, the wife of Death Eater Lucius Malfoy. Newsround reminds us that Ms McCrory “was originally cast as Bellatrix Lestrange in the fifth Potter movie, but couldn’t play the part because she was expecting a baby.”

Also, the site reports that an”announcement on who will play young Tom Riddle and Lavender Brown is expected very soon.”

Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince is currently in production and will be released in theaters November 21, 2008.


This article accompanied a thread that was started on it.

*sobs* I've never seen Helen in anything and can't comment on her acting, but visually she's the anti-Narcissa. I mean she's dark haired, she's older than HBC (and Cissy's supposed to be the youngest), and there's nothing delicate or icy about her.

I mean, it sucks that Helen got pregnant and HBC took over the role but that's no reason to just hand Narcissa to her when she's the opposite in almost every way to the character.

*sigh* Makes me long for Joely Richardson.

Michelle Pfeiffer (or a Mrs. Coulter-esque Nicole Kidman) will always be MY Narcissa.

I hope this is false, I'll be really disappointed if it's true.

Date: 2008-01-07 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xavacid.livejournal.com
Ohhhhhhhh I miss your Blackcest!

This is perfect. Little Cissy got jealous of Bella's attention on Andy. Would I be too greedy to ask for more?

Date: 2008-01-09 03:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Ohhhhhhhh I miss your Blackcest!

I didn't realize how much I missed it until I went back to it. There's just something about Blackcest that's so satisfying. I think it's the complete lack of morals that you can revel in or something but I love them.

There'll be more Blackcest from me. I likely won't be turning it out at the obsessive crazy rate that I was in the summer, but I love it too much to give it up!

Yeeaaaahhh!

Date: 2008-01-07 06:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lightbluenym.livejournal.com
Alright! Back to Blackcest! I loved your Serena/Blair fic, but I was definitely going through Bellatrix withdrawals...Oh and

"as a nomad who had been wandering through the dessert for days without water would have gorged himself at the first pond he came upon"

-is without a doubt the best simile ever written :D. Way to go!

LbN

Re: Yeeaaaahhh!

Date: 2008-01-09 03:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Alright! Back to Blackcest! I loved your Serena/Blair fic, but I was definitely going through Bellatrix withdrawals...Oh and

lol, it's like coming home after a long vacation, isn't it? It was nice to be back writing Blackcest, I hadn't realized how much I missed it. Waldsen is great, but it's kind of the anti-blackcest in tone, so it was fun to go back to crazy effed up fic, and crazy effed up but totally awesome Bellatrix.

-is without a doubt the best simile ever written :D. Way to go!

*dance of joy*

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad that you enjoyed it :D

Date: 2008-01-08 02:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amluv.livejournal.com
You beguiling creature. I've really missed your Blackcest fics. Once again you take something that is normally beyond perverse and just plain icky and make it seem like it's the natural order of things. The characters stay true to their nature. Narcissa being jealous not necessarily because she's hot for her sister, but because she thinks she's too hot *not* to be wanted by Bella and second choice to any one. Brilliant!!

“It seems I’ve snapped all your strings,”

Hands down the best line. I think I may have to steal that one from you. ;)

Oh what would the children think if they knew what you do in your *spare* time...*laughs uncontrollable*

Date: 2008-01-09 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
I've really missed your Blackcest fics.

It was like coming home after a long vacation. *sigh* I missed blackcest too, it was so much fun finishing this piece up. *oh Bella, you so crazy ... hot that is!*

Once again you take something that is normally beyond perverse and just plain icky and make it seem like it's the natural order of things.

Aw, shucks *blush*

Narcissa being jealous not necessarily because she's hot for her sister, but because she thinks she's too hot *not* to be wanted by Bella and second choice to any one. Brilliant!!

She's such a vain thing. I love her. The scene with her checking herself out and then being pissy at Bella for not acknowledging her mad hotness was so much fun to write. I love these characters because they're so extra.

Hands down the best line. I think I may have to steal that one from you. ;)

lol, enjoy :D

Oh what would the children think if they knew what you do in your *spare* time...*laughs uncontrollable*

They'd either be really turned on ... or really afraid. If they're sexy I hope that they'd be turned on, lol. *sigh, I'm soooo going to the hot place when I die*

Date: 2008-01-09 12:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teh-no.livejournal.com
That was great. Even though Bellatrix wasn't the viewpoint character, she and her odd love affair with Andromeda were nicely larger-than-life. And Narcissa was suitably... well, narcissistic, with her familiar neurosises nicely bouncing off her sisters. Well-done.

Date: 2008-01-09 04:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
she and her odd love affair with Andromeda were nicely larger-than-life.

lol, I love their odd love affair. It's so tragic, and hot and really really satisfying. Damn Andromeda and her conscience, damn her! She's a match for Bellatrix in a way that Narcissa could never be. *sigh, oh doomed love how I heart you*

I'm glad you liked it, I was a bit nervous jumping back on the bandwagon ;)

Date: 2008-01-09 06:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sporkmetender.livejournal.com
Why is all your writing like crack to me? Why? Especially when I should be sleeping, or doing homework. Or laundry. Or, you know, something productive. *sigh* It's just too good.

More, please?

Date: 2008-01-15 11:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Oh, you know blackcest is worth a few less hours sleep! lol

Thanks for commenting, I'm glad that you liked it.

And productivity is overrated ... or so I tell myself when I waste hours on end writing fanfiction ;)

Date: 2008-01-11 06:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cavortingbeasty.livejournal.com
I just stumbled upon this, and I have to say I lovelovelove it!! Blackcest is a guilty pleasure of mine, and you nailed the hotness of it.

I actually liked the fact that Andromeda seemed almost OOC. She's still a Black whether or not she has a conscience, and therefore not untouched by the Black corruption. It almost makes her defection seem all the more tragic. Very tasty. :)

Date: 2008-01-15 11:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Blackcest is a guilty pleasure of mine

lol, oh I know. It's so delicious. Wrong but delicious. In fact the wrongness of it makes it so much yummier. *dreamy sigh* Blackcest.

She's still a Black whether or not she has a conscience, and therefore not untouched by the Black corruption. It almost makes her defection seem all the more tragic.

So true. Even in DH she was very much a Black, Bellatrix-like in looks, and somewhat Narcissa-like in icy composure. I could totally see Andromeda as having been on board with family play-time. She probably was like "no, no, no, Bella no, okay ... hee, that feels nice" and was then fully on board with it. She probably only started pulling away when Bella started to lose her marbles and became cruel instead of playfully perverted.

*sigh* Oh, Blackcest I put way to much thought into your sexy dynamics!

Thanks for commenting, I'm glad that you enjoyed the story :D

Date: 2008-01-15 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ashirashadow.livejournal.com
I can't believe I had forgotten to read this! I had put it aside for occupation at work and then retardedly forgot. Luckily I stalk you every few months so I'm ok.

Love love love your stuff all the time. *beams*

Date: 2008-01-15 11:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Your icon = love. Seriously, brilliant!

Also ... yay for stalking! :D

Date: 2008-01-15 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ashirashadow.livejournal.com
Oh man! I totally stole it from visoka. She's only the best person alive. I don't know who made it for her b/c I was too lazy to look but yeah, when I saw it I had to take it and use it for everything. :D

I'm so glad you're not freaked by the stalking. Some people just take that the wrong way. hahaha

Date: 2009-05-03 01:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dariclone.livejournal.com
Wiw, very hot. I really like the way Narcissa's jealousy of Andromeda played into this.

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