Fic: The Edge (Twilight, Alice/Bella 3/?)

[fembuck]

Title: The Edge
Author: Janine
Fandom: Twilight
Pairing: Alice/Bella
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: All characters are owned by Stephanie Meyer. I’m just borrowing them.
Summary: Bella and Alice have to decide what they are going to do now that things have changed between them.

Previously:
Prologue: Golden Slumber
Part 1: Skating the Edge
Part 2: My Favorite Mistake
 

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A Week Later

“Bella,” Mike Newton whispered urgently.

Bella looked up from the pair of boots she was pricing, a mildly curious look on her face.

“What?”

“Did I miss a memo about hell freezing over?” Mike asked lifting a questioning eyebrow at her.

Bella stared at him for a moment, confusion covering her face. “I have no idea what you’re talking about,” Bella informed him, turning back to the boots in front of her. She wasn’t sure that she cared either. It was probably just some girl he liked, and she had enough woman problems of her own, without having to try to counsel Mike Newton.

Mike cocked his head to the side, and then lowered his voice. “Look who just walked in,” he continued, either immune to Bella’s indifference or choosing to ignore it. Based on what she knew of Mike, Bella would have put her money on ‘choosing to ignore it’. However, the boots that Bella was occupying herself with were hardly captivating either, and so mild curiosity was enough to encourage her to turn her head in the direction Mike was looking.

Fully expecting to see nothing of interest, Bella was surprised when her heart spasmed painfully in her chest. She had not expected to find herself looking at the singularly most exquisite face she had ever seen when she turned around. But there, right in front of her eyes, was a sight so heartbreakingly beautiful that just looking at her almost brought tears to Bella’s eyes.

“Alice,” Bella breathed out, not even aware that she had spoken until Alice’s head turned in her direction, a blissful smile spreading across her lips when their eyes met.

“Did she hear you?” Mike asked, squinting at Alice as she began to make her way over towards them. They were near the back of store pricing some items, and so Alice was quite a distance away from them when she entered. More than far enough away that Bella’s whispered word should not have registered with her. “How did she? Nah, she couldn’t have. But she turned,” he continued, what Bella assumed was to himself, since she certainly wasn’t participating in the conversation. “Could she have … did she hear you?”

“Of course she didn’t,” Bella responded deciding to put an end to Mike’s stream of consciousness ramblings. Her eyes focused on Alice as she spoke, watching as the pixyish beauty danced towards them. “She probably just has a question,” Bella continued. She felt like she was staring, possibly open-mouthed, and was trying to keep him from noticing how enthralled she was. Mike seemed to be in an oddly observant mood that day, and it wouldn’t do for him to wonder why she getting all moony-eyed and breathless because Alice Cullen had walked into the store.

“So, I guess you got this one?” Mike said sounding a little disappointed, his eyes still trained on Alice, just as Bella’s were.

Even though the other students at school gave the Cullen’s a wide-birth, they weren’t immune to their beauty, and often tentative overtures of friendship would be made if they ran into a Cullen alone outside of school. That being so, it was painfully obvious to Bella that Mike wouldn’t have minded getting to know Alice better, but she thought – with a minimal amount of remorse – that was just too bad for him, because Alice was hers.

“Yeah, I got her,” Bella said already putting Mike Newton out of her mind as Alice finally reached them.

“Hey Bella,” Alice greeted cheerfully, and then without another word she placed her hands lightly on Bella’s arms and leaned forward, and pressed her lips softly against Bella’s cheek. Pulling back, she then wrapped her arms around Bella, hugging her like they were old college roommates who hadn’t seen each other in years.

Mike smiled a little at the affectionate display and Bella blushed, knowing exactly what kind of thoughts were going through his head. With a mental smirk, she wondered what he would think if he knew just how much they had really gotten up to together. He probably would have had to walk around with his clip board in front of his pants for the rest of the afternoon if he knew that a week before, she and Alice had been rolling around her bedroom floor with Alice’s hand up her shirt.

“Hey,” Bella greeted softly hugging Alice back enthusiastically, smiling into the curtain of Alice’s hair even as her thoughts made her cheeks continue to blaze red. “What’s up?”

“Nothing much, just browsing,” Alice said pulling away from her, settling into a casual and elegant pose in front of them. Her eyes swept around the store nonchalantly, scanning the shelves around them for a few seconds, and then she returned them to Bella. “I remembered you were working today and thought I’d stop by and say ‘Hey’. It’s been a while,” she continued, her tone relentlessly pleasant as her eyes drifted over in Mike’s direction.

Another breathtakingly beautiful smile came to her face.

“Hi, Mike,” she said warmly as if they were old friends.

Mike’s lips curved up into a smile. Obviously, Alice Cullen voluntarily talking to him had just made his day. However, despite his obvious excitement his eyes looked panicked, and Bella sighed. Mike was smitten. Bella couldn’t blame him really, Alice was wonderful and amazing and fantastical and a dictionaries worth of other complimentary adjectives, but Bella had seen the expression Mike was wearing on his face on the faces of other boys before, and she knew without a shadow of a doubt that whatever came out of his mouth would be awkward, and possibly even horrifying.

“Huagh,” Mike chocked out, smiling dopily at Alice as that sound – whatever it was – exited his mouth.

Bella scrunched up her face. She knew it. This was going to be tragic. Mike seemed to have the same realization, and trying to recover from his embarrassing first attempt at conversation he pulled himself up straighter and cleared his throat.

“I mean, hey,” Mike began again, his voice oddly deep. “Hi,” he went on clearing his throat again. “‘Sup, Alice,” he ended with, cocking his head up while looking in her direction. He looked like a drug dealer trying to signal a potential costumer from across the street. Bella winced and turned away from him. He was too sad to be amusing, and she was sure that if he stayed in Alice’s presence for a moment longer things would only get more awkward.

“Mike,” Bella said, drawing his attention over to her before Alice could be forced to have to respond to that. He looked over at her almost gratefully. “I’m gonna go for my lunch break now. Be back in an hour.”

With that Bella took a few steps closer to Alice until they were standing side by side.

“Fran’s?” Bella asked as casually as she could. She knew that they wouldn’t be going anywhere near the diner.

“Sounds great,” Alice responded. “See ya, Mike,” she said offering him another breathtaking smile. And then Bella looped her arm through Alice’s and began to drag her towards the door.

Bella was silent as they made their way towards the door, and remained so as they made it out onto the street. Alice hadn’t been kidding when she had said it had been a while, and now Bella found herself feeling awkward in Alice’s presence for perhaps the first time since they had met.

They hadn’t seen each other for more than a few seconds since the night they had kissed in Bella’s her room, and she was beginning to despair that Alice was never going to come near her for any prolonged period of time again. She suspected that such thoughts were a touch melodramatic. After all Alice had said that they both needed time to think. But Bella hadn’t thought that ‘thinking’ meant that they would have no contact with each other, and she couldn’t help but worry. Alice had become a necessity in her life, and she didn’t want to lose her because of a fit of teenage hormones.

“Feel like going for a little drive?” Alice asked as they rounded the corner to Trillium Ave.

Bella blinked, the sound of Alice’s sweet, soft voice breaking her out of the trance she had fallen into. Looking around her she saw the Cullen’s silver S60R parked a little ways down the road in front of them, and she looked over at the petite brunette and smiled.

“Sure, that sounds nice.”

--

“Where are we going?” Bella asked as Alice sped away from the curb, her eyes focused on the road ahead of them as she drove with purpose.

She obviously had a destination in mind. Bella thought that was good. At least one of them had a plan.

“A little spot I know,” Alice murmured in response, turning in her seat to smile reassuringly at Bella before she focused on the road once more. “Don’t worry I’ll get you back in time.”

“I don’t doubt that the way you drive,” Bella muttered, causing the car to fill with the sound of Alice’s twinkling laughter.

Bella closed her eyes, allowing the sound to wash over her. She had missed the sound of Alice’s laughter over the past week. Then again, she had missed pretty much everything about Alice over the past week.

“You don’t mind, do you?” Alice asked a few seconds later, breaking the silence that ran through the car once she had stopped laughing.

“Mind what?” Bella asked looking over at Alice’s perfect profile, tracing the planes of her face with her eyes, taking it all in incase she had to go another prolonged period of time without seeing the raven-haired beauty.

“My stealing you away,” Alice said smiling a little, turning her head so that she could wink at Bella. “I mean, those boots didn’t have to be on the shelf ten minutes ago, or anything did they?” she asked, her eyes twinkling.

“First of all, ha ha,” Bella said making a face at Alice, which just made the vampire laugh, again. “Secondly, you didn’t steal me away. I volunteered. So it would be very rude of me to mind now, wouldn’t it?”

“I suppose it would,” Alice murmured as the car began to slow down. “Please do forgive my faux pas,” she continued smiling as she turned off the ignition. Bella smiled a little, Alice’s antiquated phrasing charming her.

Alice leaned her head against the back of her seat, turning her head lazily to the side, watching Bella smile, a soft smile of her own spreading across her lips until they were sitting there, gazing adoringly at each other.

A few seconds later, Bella blushed and Alice straightened up in her seat and opened her door. In the time it took Bella to blink, Alice was then outside of the car, pulling the passenger side door open.

Alice extended her hand to Bella chivalrously.

“Shall we?”

--

Bella looked around her smiling happily. She wished that she had been paying closer attention to the road as they drove so that she could have seen the route Alice took to get to this place. They were on the beach, but it was a quiet, secluded section of it that Bella had never been before, and it was beautiful. Magnificent really, like something out of a romance novel.

“It’s beautiful out here,” Bella said softly, crossing her arms across her chest and rubbing her arms as she spoke, still gazing around.

“I’ve always thought so,” Alice breathed out, her eyes focused on Bella, watching her movements as she spoke. “You’re cold,” Alice said a moment later, a frown marring her beautiful features as she gazed at Bella’s pebbling arms.

“It’s okay,” Bella said, hearing the self-chastisement in Alice’s voice. “I’m fine. It’s just the breeze off the water. Don’t worry about it.”

“But I will,” Alice said stubbornly. “I should have brought a sweater or something for you,” she continued. Her expression as she gazed at Bella was unfathomable. Then she sighed. “I can’t even wrap my arms around you.”

“Sure you can,” Bella said, trying not to sound too eager to have Alice’s arms wrapped around her again. She had also missed the feel of Alice’s marble body pressed against her own as they snuggled up listening to music or watching movies.

Alice looked over at her and smiled. “Quite right,” she agreed pleasantly, “but it wouldn’t warm you up.”

“I still wouldn’t mind,” Bella said softly, looking over at Alice tentatively, not sure how her comment would be received.

Alice stopped walking and turned to stare at her. She held Bella’s gaze for a long moment, and then she murmured, “Okay,” and gracefully lowered herself down onto the sand, motioning for Bella to sit in front of her a second later.

Bella wasted no time complying with the silent request, and quickly scrambled into Alice’s open arms.

Bella shivered a little as Alice’s cool arms wrapped around her. It was actually much chillier out with Alice’s cool body wrapped around her own, but she didn’t mind. She wouldn’t have traded Alice’s body against her for anything in the world. Chilly or not, it was more than worth it to feel Alice against her once again.

“I’m glad you stopped by,” Bella said, her eyes facing forward, watching the waves gently lap at the shore. The feel of Alice’s chest rising and falling behind her had soothed her nerves a little. “I,” Bella laughed lightly, as if she thought that what she was going to say was the most ridiculous thing in the world. “I was beginning to think that you were avoiding me,” she continued, laughing again.

Alice tightened her arms around Bella.

“I was,” Alice breathed out, resting her chin on Bella’s shoulder the moment the words were out of mouth, the action comforting and reassuring, as if she was trying to cushion the verbal blow she had just delivered.

“Oh,” Bella breathed out. Despite Alice’s comforting hold on her, she wasn’t quite able to keep the hurt she felt at Alice’s revelation out of her voice.

Alice made a soft, indistinct sound in her throat and pressed her lips against Bella’s shoulder, kissing her through her shirt.

“I didn’t want to avoid you,” Alice said a few seconds later, sighing softly as she rested her chin against Bella’s shoulder again. “But, I needed to think and that’s very hard for me with you around.”

“What were you thinking about?” Bella asked, knowing that the reason Alice had come to see her was so that they could have this conversation.

“You already know,” Alice said gently, poking Bella in the rubs playfully, her chin still resting comfortably on the other girls shoulder.

“I do,” Bella said taking a deep breath and releasing it slowly. “I’m trying to stall. I don’t want to have this conversation,” she admitted, knowing that there was no possibility for it to end well.

No matter what happened, there was going to be loss. No matter how things worked out, her life was going to change. Everything had been going so wonderfully since Phoenix, and she didn’t want to lose any of it. She didn’t want things to change, not even one little bit.

Alice released a sound that was somewhere between a laugh and a sigh. “How wonderful it would be if ignoring things we didn’t like would make them go away,” she said wistfully. “No more reality TV!” she declared.

“No more Bluetooths!” Bella said smiling.

“No more calculus!” Alice pronounced happily.

“No more school!” Bella said excitedly.

Alice chuckled. “You like school,” she said nuzzling her face against Bella’s.

“Yeah,” Bella said shrugging. “I do. I guess I got a little carried away.”

Alice chuckled again, and then pressed her lips against Bella’s cheek. She was silent for a moment, and then when she spoke again her voice was serious.

“Have you been thinking too?” Alice asked, drawing them back to the conversation at hand.

“Yes,” Bella said. Her mood, which had lightened a bit a few moments before, became somber once more.

In between work, spending time with Edward, and missing Alice, she had done nothing but think.

“I don’t want to lose you,” Bella said, reaching for Alice’s hand, squeezing as tightly as she could. She knew that it wouldn’t hurt Alice any, that in fact she was more likely to bruise herself, but she didn’t care.

“I don’t want to lose you either,” Alice said softly. “The passage of time is so different for us. A year is nothing,” she said her voice whisper soft. “It feels like I just met you yesterday,” she continued, “and two days is far too short a time to spend with someone like you.”

“Oh, Alice,” Bella exclaimed, struggling in Alice’s arms until the vampire loosened her hold, giving Bella enough space to turn around so that she could see Alice’s face.

Bella brought her hand up to Alice’s cheek and cupped it tenderly in her hand. “Alice,” she repeated, stroking her thumb across to smooth, marble surface.

Alice sighed softly as Bella pressed her lips against her own, her hand moving to cup Bella’s neck as the other girl deepened the kiss, her warm lips and tongue making Alice purr. Alice moved her hand to the back of Bella’s neck, holding her gently and leaned forward, her lips meeting Bella’s with an equal anxiousness and desperation.

Alice shivered as Bella’s hand began to rub along her ribcage.

This was exactly what she had sought to avoid.

“Bella,” she said softly, gently extracting her lips from Bella’s, her hand resting lightly on Bella’s shoulder holding her in place as she observed her with dark eyes. “We can’t,” Alice continued shaking her head as she closed her eyes. “What happened in your room, what happened just now, can’t happen again.”

“I know,” Bella said, dropping her eyes from Alice’s, looking down between their bodies contritely. “I know. I’m sorry,” she added, blinking rapidly trying to control the urge to cry.

“Don’t apologize,” Alice said placing a finger under Bella’s chin, tilting her face back up, “not to me at least. I kissed you back,” she continued sighing softly. “Please don’t cry,” she added a second later, her thumb stroking Bella’s cheek soothingly.

Bella sniffled and rested her head on Alice’s shoulder, sighing deeply as she did.

“What are we going to do?” Bella asked despondently a few moments later. “I love Edward, but … I love you too Alice, I do. I don’t want to lose either of you.”

“I understand,” Alice said softly, gently stroking Bella’s hair as she considered how to continue. “Being away from you this past week was very difficult for me. Much more so than I thought it would be.”

She paused there and was silent for a moment before she chuckled darkly.

“I’ve been avoiding Edward all week as well,” she said sadly. “My thoughts turned to you so often and my mind would sing at the memory of your lips and the feel of your body against mine,” she went on sighing. “I couldn’t risk him picking up on my thoughts.”

“I suppose I’m lucky that he can’t read my mind,” Bella said, thinking about all of the times that Alice had crossed her mind in Edward’s presence. She would have had to avoid him too if her thoughts weren’t shielded from him.

“I love you too, Bella. I want you to know that,” Alice said, her voice soft and serious. “But I can’t lose Jasper,” she said sadly. “I need him, and I love him fiercely,” she continued. “And vampires, Bella, we’re no better at sharing mates than humans are. We can’t continue with what happened the other night and expect to keep them.”

Bella shivered in her arms, and pressed her face more tightly against Alice’s neck.

“Don’t leave me,” Bella said softly, her warm breath caressing Alice’s cool skin, making the vampire shudder.

“I don’t want to,” Alice said ardently, “But we can only be together as friends,” she continued, “only friends.”

Bella nodded against Alice’s chest, though the knot in her stomach didn’t untwist completely.

“We must continue on like before, as if that night never happened,” Alice went on when Bella offered no resistance. “No more kissing on the lips, and no more sleepovers,” Alice said, knowing that she couldn’t handle lying next to Bella anymore. Frankly, she was amazed that Edward had been able to control himself for so long, lying in bed with Bella night after night. She would have gone insane with want long ago.

“But we can still touch, right?” Bella asked a trace of panic in her voice. “I can still hold your hand, and we can still snuggle during ‘So You Think You Can Dance?’?” she added, knowing that she wouldn’t be able to abstain from touching Alice all together.

“Yes,” Alice said, knowing that to place any further restrictions on their interactions would mean that they could not interact at all. “But we mustn’t cross the line.”

Bella smiled and relaxed against Alice’s frame, gratefully curling herself around her body.

“I can live with that,” she breathed out softly. “I can totally live with that,” she repeated contentedly.

“Good,” Alice said breathing in deeply, releasing a relieved sigh a few seconds later. “So,” Alice chirped, forcing a lighter note into her voice. “Now that that’s sorted,” she continued smiling down at Bella. “What do you want for your birthday?”

“Birthday,” Bella whined. “Ugh, nothing. Don’t remind me,” she said shaking her head petulantly from side to side.

“You don’t mean that,” Alice gasped, pulling back from Bella so that she could see her face. “Humans love birthdays.”

“Well, this human doesn’t. Not this year, or any after,” Bella responded, the terrible nightmare image of herself as an old lady, flanked on both sides by Alice and Edward looking just as young and perfect as the day she had met them, coming into her head and making her shudder.

“But why?” Alice asked, frowning as she thought about the plans she had to run up her credit card buying gifts for Bella.

“I just don’t want to celebrate getting a year older,” Bella said softly, shifting a little so that she could look out at gently rippling water once more. “I’ll be older than you and Edward soon,” she said. “And I’m just going to keep getting older until I die, and the two of you will stay teenagers, forever,” she said. Her voice was a pained whisper. “I don’t want to celebrate that. I don’t want to celebrate being a year closer to death.”

“Bella,” Alice said approximating a tone Bella had heard Esme use from time to time when one of the children was being unreasonable or difficult, “Birthday’s are meant to be a celebration of life, not to remind you that you’re a year closer to death. I want to get you something to show you how glad I am that you’re alive, and that you’re in my life.”

“Oh, Alice, I already know that,” Bella said taking Alice’s hand in her own and squeezing it. “You don’t need to get me anything, just being around you is more than enough. Please,” she said beseechingly. “Please, please, please, don’t make a big deal out of my birthday. It’s just another day of the year.”

“You really don’t want me to buy you something?” Alice asked sadly.

Bella shook her head.

Alice sighed, and stared out at the water morosely for a minute. Then, choosing her words very carefully, she finally muttered, “Fine. I won’t buy you anything.”

“Good,” Bella said pleased to have the issue resolved. “Thank you,” she added, squeezing Alice’s hand, trying to get her to cheer up.

Alice smiled and kissed Bella cheek.

She had promised not to buy her anything, but that didn’t mean that she was going to do nothing for Bella’s birthday. They still had a little while left to enjoy the beach, but as soon as she dropped Bella back off at Newton’s she was going to go to the bookstore and get some cook books, and then head over to the art supply store. Expensive gifts may have been out, but Bella hadn’t said anything about throwing her a party, or making her a gift.

To be continued …

Comments

[kempt-contempt.livejournal.com]

nooooooo! bella and alice are supposed to be together!!!
haha. i love this.

please more?
i cant stand the suspense.




firstcomment.

[fembuck.livejournal.com]

nooooooo! bella and alice are supposed to be together!!!

Trufax. I just wish someone had informed SMeyer of this, lol!

please more? i cant stand the suspense.

Another chapter should be up tomorrow! But don't worry, as their continued snuggling on the beach indicate, it's not gonna be easy for these two stop touching (or wanting the sex0r from) each other ;)

[hp-dreamer7.livejournal.com]

Ahhhhh I love this so much.
You're amazing, and I can't wait for more!

[fembuck.livejournal.com]

*iz happy*

Thanks, I'm glad that you liked the update!

P.S. Is that angel in your icon Carla Gugino? The insane hotness makes me think it's Carla Gugino, but the awesome hair masking her awesome face compels me to ask.

[hp-dreamer7.livejournal.com]

I actually have no clue...

[pattytehpirate.livejournal.com]

The girl in your pic is KStew, no jokes!

[soad-betch.livejournal.com]

I love your stlye of writing! Cant wait for more

[fembuck.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! I hope to have the next chapter up in a day or so :D

[orange-soda77.livejournal.com]

So good! I want Bella and Alice together. *pouts*

Can't wait for more. :) It's amazing.

[fembuck.livejournal.com]

I want Bella and Alice together. *pouts*

Don't worry, as their continued snuggling on the beach indicates, it's not gonna be easy for these two stop touching each other (or wanting the sexual healing from each other) ;) Of course, I'm gonna 'go and make things so complicated' for them :D

I'm glad you're still enjoying it, and I hope to have the next chapter up in a day or so :D

[lightbluenym.livejournal.com]

I can still hold your hand, and we can still snuggle during ‘So You Think You Can Dance?’?”

Adorable.

[fembuck.livejournal.com]

lol! That's what I loved about them in the book. They were constantly touching each other. So I don't feel back making them complete snuggle bunnies, who are super affectionate (in private, they are too classy for horrible PDAs) and just want to hug each other, and kiss each other, and squeeze each other all over ;)

And, you know, 'So You Think You Can Dance' FTW!

[leditzypenguin.livejournal.com]

“Huagh,” Mike chocked out, smiling dopily at Alice as that sound – whatever it was – exited his mouth.
I totally empathize with Mike. My reaction would be very similar to his in Alice's presence :D

“No more reality TV!” she declared.
“I can still hold your hand, and we can still snuggle during ‘So You Think You Can Dance?’?”
Something seems a little out of sync there...

And seriously, stupid Jasper and Edward need to just go die. Or hook up. They need to stop interfering with the obvious OTP-ness of Alice and Bella...

Absolutely loving the fic so far, and can't wait to read more!

[fembuck.livejournal.com]

My reaction would be very similar to his in Alice's presence

lol. I know. It's like, "Don't feel bad Mike, we'd all be mumbling, drooling zombies in the face of Alice's insane hotness". Mm, Alice.

Something seems a little out of sync there...
... ... ... uh ... Alice giving into Bella's desire to watch SYTYCD just shows how much she loves her? *hopeful tone* LOL, no I guess Alice and I are just walking contradictions. I mean, reality TV sucks, but SYTYCD is pure good. There are exceptions to every rule (in this series even death is guaraneed), y/y? :D

And seriously, stupid Jasper and Edward need to just go die. Or hook up.

I would totally love them to hook up to get them out of the way. But then I would have to write Edward for a prolonged period of time, and I don't think I can do that. *shudders* He's such a douche.

OTP-ness of Alice and Bella

They really are. And anyone who say differently can just go to the left.

[fembuck.livejournal.com]

More very soon, hopefully the next chapter will be up tomorrow!

[cyandragonfly.livejournal.com]

Dude, you gotta keep this thing going.

Have you read any of them? I got through Twilight and New Moon...

I have about seven girls surrounding me at school that are obsessed (to the point of crying when they realised the new book came out two days after when they thought it would) with Twilight that I would have been ripped to shreds, had I not read at least one book. It was okay, but nothing to gush over. Not like this fic.

Bribing with cherry's really does work, lol

And now for the cherry...give me a request pairing and I'll see what I can do about paying off my debts. Though it might help if I could figure out how to post on here...

Tootles

[fembuck.livejournal.com]

Dude, you gotta keep this thing going.

Oh, don't worry about that, this thing is taking on a life of it's own :D

I would have been ripped to shreds, had I not read at least one book.

Now I'm picturing that scene from "Mean Girls" when Cady imagines High School as the animal kingdom.

You definitely made the right decision reading it, if that's the case :D And I mean the books weren't so horrible that I couldn't finish reading them, but yeah, definitely nothing to gush over (except for any Alice/Bella interactions. Alice saying, "I think she's having hysterics. Maybe you should slap her?" was probably probably the only moment I laughed out loud reading New Moon).

give me a request pairing and I'll see what I can do about paying off my debts.

Would Alice/Bella be way too obvious? lol. Seriously though, there's an intolerable lack of Alice/Bella out there, and I'm kind of obsessed with them right now.

[myinnerme69.livejournal.com]

As a firt time reader of this pairing, I must say you have me hooked. :D

Can't wait to read the update. :)

[fembuck.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much, I'm really glad that you're enjoying it. I'm a first time writer of the pairing, so I'm glad I'm not mucking it up ;)

Can't wait to read the update. :)

It's up! Hope you enjoy :D

[narcolepsy-slds.livejournal.com]

dammit, you are evil.
I just came home from work and I really really have to catch up on my papers and stuff, and what happened? I read all the chapters and knowing myself I will push the refresh button compulsively.

great story (and I have never read the saga so far)

[fembuck.livejournal.com]

*cackles ... evilly*

I'm glad you're liking it, even if it has kept you from papers and various stuff!

and I have never read the saga so far

As much as I love these two together and are obsessed with them at the moment, you're probably better off having not read the books. They are ... aggravating, to say the least.

[overthemoo.livejournal.com]

Gah, can we make you the new author of all things Twilight-related??

[joeyseph.livejournal.com]

i would like that.
*crowns her S. Mayer JR.*

[joeyseph.livejournal.com]

aw, this was not one of my fave chap.
they flipping broke up! well, they werent actually dating but..
*talks to self*
evil twin: shut up!
me: ok.

Love it

[(Anonymous)]

I am addicted to these fics! This is exactly what those dreadful, edward-obsessed books should be like which is something Stephanie Meyer doesnt seem to understand.

[http://users.livejournal.com/junet_/]

Nooo! They're not together anymore. *sad face*

But they will be... right? =P

[curiousleigh.livejournal.com]

Please let them be together. I mean yeah I like Edward and Jasper is... But Bella And Alice is so much better.

[demzrulez.livejournal.com]

awesome

[thehelene.livejournal.com]

No more Bluetooths!
LOL bella! bluetooth is so cool!
also: pfff friends! as if they'll be able to be just friends xD

i don't even know how to tell you how much i'm loving this fic! just believe me when i say i am

[craving-vintage.livejournal.com]

I am kind of glad I found your story late because since they are all done I don't have to wait for the next chapter. :)

I can go as fast or as slow as I want to in reading them.

And I want to go fast to read what happens next, but I also want to go slow because I want to savor and enjoy every minute of it and as much as possible.

It is sooo good!

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I agree with the person above me, that I don't have to wait for the next chapter to be up. Haha.

Ughh. They won't be able resist each other for long, right? Right??