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fembuckTitle: The Edge Previous chapters here
Author: Janine
Fandom: Twilight
Pairing: Alice/Bella
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: All characters are owned by Stephanie Meyer. I’m just borrowing them.
Summary: Alice’s training comes to an end.
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Five Months Later
Alice walked forward slowly, her chest rising and falling gently as her feet moved noiselessly across the floor.
It was cool in the room, and Alice was preternaturally aware of the feeling of Carlisle’s fingers lightly resting against her neck.
The woman in front of her looked peaceful. Alice knew it was because of the drugs being pumped into her system through the I.V. parked beside her bed, but the tranquil expression struck Alice in some profound way she couldn’t explain, and she stopped walking.
“Are you alright?” Carlisle asked softly, his voice lower than a whisper.
Human ears never would have been able to detect the question, even if they had been standing pressed up against his side.
“Yes,” Alice breathed out in a slightly louder tone.
She continued towards the bed.
Alice stopped when she was in line with the sleeping woman’s torso. She stalled, taking a moment to stretch her neck, Carlisle’s fingers moving with her as she rotated it.
“She’s bleeding through the bandages,” Alice said softly, staring down at the figure in front of her.
“Yes,” Carlisle agreed, reaching out for the blanket covering the woman with his free hand, and pulling it down. “That’s why I’m going to change it,” he continued, one hand steady on Alice’s neck as he reached out with his other to begin undoing the bandages. “She didn’t get out of surgery long ago. It’ll take a while longer for the bleeding to stop completely.”
Alice’s eyes were focused on Carlisle’s hand as it moved assuredly, her eyes easily able to follow his rapid and precise movements.
When the wound was unwrapped and it lay open to her gaze. Alice’s eyes fluttered and she breathed in deeply.
Carlisle’s hand stilled over the new bandages, and Alice leaned forward, bending gracefully at her waist until her nose was millimeters away from the bleeding incision.
She breathed in deeply.
Carlisle’s thumb twitched against her neck.
Alice breathed in again.
She could feel her mouth beginning to fill with venom and she wanted to part her lips and let her tongue run across the warm, slick flesh in front of her. The smell of the blood was spreading throughout her, and she began to feel lightheaded, almost delirious with the scent of it.
Alice closed her eyes and stopped breathing for a second to focus herself. Keeping her eyes closed, she then breathed in and out deeply, allowing the scent to enter her once again. It would have been easier to control herself if she stopped breath, but she knew that when she fed on Bella that she would constantly be taking in her scent, and that she had to keep breathing during practice as well.
“The surgery went well,” Carlisle began to say conversationally.
Alice turned her head to look at him. She was having trouble focusing on his words but she knew that he was talking to her, and the sound of his voice was comforting.
She looked back down at the woman on the bed. She listened to the steady beating of her heart, watching her sweet blood as it leaked out of her wound, her vampire eyes seeing it in all of its terrible glory as Carlisle continued to talk.
He spread antiseptics over the incisions, his latex covered fingers moving through the blood, disturbing it, increasing the potency of its scent as he worked.
“Not that you’re bragging,” Alice murmured, her lips curving up in a small smile as she turned to look at her father once again.
It was becoming easier for her to focus on Carlisle’s words and she was able to follow him as he talked about the complex procedure going off without a hitch.
“Of course not,” Carlisle said smiling as well. “I do admit that I have an unfair advantage.”
Carlisle continued to explain the surgery he had performed and Alice listened, occasionally asking questions or commenting on something he had said as he continued to treat the woman on the bed and then began to bandage her up again.
“All done,” Carlisle said finally, carefully removing the gloves he had been wearing and moving over to a special receptacle to dispose of them.
Alice looked up at the clock, and blinked in surprise.
Half and hour had gone by.
She’d barely noticed.
When she looked back over at Carlisle, he was drawing the blanket back up over the woman’s sleeping body. A moment later he then turned and directed a dazzling smile at her.
“I’m ready,” Alice said softly, slowly, an audible breath of air escaping her as she began to blink quickly.
“Yes, you are,” Carlisle responded talking a step towards her, his large hand moving to rest on her shoulder.
“How ‘bout that,” Alice muttered dully, still blinking as her eyes scanned the immediate area around the bed.
She felt like she was going to fall over, and made her way on uncertain legs over to a nearby chair and sat down.
“Are you having second thoughts?” Carlisle asked watching her carefully.
He had thought that she would be a ball of excitement when she was given the news. He had thought he would have to hug her to keep her from bouncing off of the walls.
“No,” Alice dazedly, shaking her head as she spoke. “No,” she repeated again looking over at him, her tone more assured than it had been the first time. “It’s just … I can’t believe it’s time. It always seemed so far off … to be such a distant thing. And now it’s here,” Alice said shaking her head. “I’m not used to being surprised, I guess.”
“No, I don’t suppose you are,” Carlisle said smiling gently.
Alice was silent for a second, and then smirked.
“I knew you were going to say that,” she drawled, and Carlisle’s fatherly smile turned into an amused grin.
Alice stared at Carlisle contemplatively for a minute.
“How did it only take six months?” Alice asked, sounding bewildered.
“You’ve been living a very controlled life for a very long time,” Carlisle responded moving over to the sit in the chair next to her. “You have a highly developed will,” he continued smiling gently. “The truth is, you were two thirds of the way done when you started.”
Alice stared at him for a few seconds, and then took a deep breath, scrubbing her fingers over her eyes before she ran a hand through her hair.
“Bella’s going to need a doctor’s note to be excused from class,” she said finally, her eyes on the woman on the bed once more, “something that will cover an extended absence.”
Alice scrubbed her hand through her hair again. Bella had just gotten started at University and she was already going to have to leave. She’d just written her first semester exams, and was still learning how to milk her meal plan for all it was worth. She’d wanted Bella to be able to have a little more time to experience everything.
“She’s had a bad fall. She slipped a disc,” Carlisle said meeting Alice’s eyes as she turned to look at him. “She’ll be bed ridden for weeks and confined to her home for months.”
“How tragic,” Alice murmured, her lips curving up in a smile.
“It’s extremely sad. Heartbreaking really,” Carlisle replied with a smile of his own.
“Well,” Alice said standing, extending her hand to Carlisle, laughing lightly as he pretended to struggle to get up. “I guess it’s time to go break the good news.”
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Thirty Minutes Later
Alice smiled as the door to Bella’s apartment-style dorm was thrown open, her hand automatically lifting to wave at the blonde standing in the doorway.
“Bella!” Ainsley yelled, stepping back from the open doorway to let Alice in. “Really-really-ridiculously-good-looking is here!”
“I’m really gonna have to look into changing my name,” Alice said stepping into the apartment room. “It’s a mouthful when introducing myself, and I’m beginning to think that the second ‘really’ is coming off a little arrogant,” she continued smirking at Ainsley who rolled her eyes and shut the door.
“Bella!” Ainsley called again, a small smile touching her lips. “Really-really-ridiculously-good-looking, with a bright future ahead of her in the field of comedy, is here!” she called amending her previous statement.
Alice smirked and bowed playfully in response.
She liked Ainsley. When they had first met, Ainsley had been a little wary of her, as most humans were – even though they weren’t fully conscious of the feelings. In some way humans – who weren’t Bella – just sensed danger whenever they were around a vampire, and most people were wary and cautious around them. Her size and generally affability usually got people to relax around her after a while however, and Ainsley was no exception.
Once they had gotten to know each other a little, Ainsley had loosened right up, and they’d had quite a bit of fun teasing each other since.
“I’m in my room!” Bella yelled from the back of the apartment.
“Oh,” Ainsley said, grinning at Alice. “It’s going to be one of those visits, is it?”
Alice smiled winsomely back at her. “It’s always one of those visits,” she replied wiggling her eyebrows.
Ainsley shook her head and then let out a mockingly sad sigh. “You almost make me wish I had an inner-Ellen to get in touch with.”
Alice reached out and patted Ainsley’s shoulder, knowing that Ainsley wouldn’t be able to feel the coolness of her hand through the glove she was wearing.
“Sometimes wishing isn’t enough,” she said, her voice impossibly earnest. “Sometimes you need to believe,” Alice emphasized, squeezing Ainsley’s shoulder gently. “In your heart,” she whispered. Her voice was pregnant with meaning as she poked her finger to Ainsley’s chest, just above her heart.
“Honestly, you should start a blog or something. Comedy genius like that shouldn’t be wasted on me alone,” Ainsley replied rolling her eyes again, her voice a study in sarcasm. “Go have sex with your girlfriend,” she said waving her hand in the direction of Bella’s room. “I’m bored of you and your ‘comedy’,” she said making air quotes.
“I swear, we’re just going to talk,” Alice said holding up her hands innocently as she began to walk towards Bella’s room.
“Yeah, yeah,” Ainsley muttered under her breath as Alice slowly moved away from her. “I’m sure it’ll be oral at least,” she continued a few seconds later, her voice barely above a whisper.
Alice heard the comment however and smiled.
“According to Steve Woodhouse, that’s a specialty of yours,” Alice called out, stopping just in front of Bella’s door.
Ainsley turned around, her mouth forming an almost perfect circle as she gaped at Alice, amazed that she had caught her muttered words.
“That’s exactly what his impression looked like,” Alice said smiling, her body shifting to the side gracefully to avoid the pillow Ainsley quickly picked up and threw at her.
Alice laughed, shifting to the other side as another pillow went flying at her, and then she opened the door to Bella’s room, quickly slipping inside and closing the door as Ainsley reached for a plastic coaster to hurl in her direction.
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Bella trailed her fingers lightly across Alice’s collarbone. Her eyes were serious, and focused on Alice as her fingers moved, and finally Bella sighed and spoke.
“What is it?” she asked.
Alice had been in a strange mood once she had entered her room. At first she had thought that it was the disorientation that sometimes followed Alice’s visions, but when she had asked Alice had told her that she hadn’t had a vision all day. Still, vision or no vision, it couldn’t be denied that Alice was distant, and Bella was beginning to drive herself crazy speculating about the cause of her lovers distraction.
“Nothing bad,” Alice said looking over at Bella, smiling her softly. She could hear the worry in Bella’s voice. “In fact it’s good news,” she continued, reaching out to stroke Bella’s face. “I was just trying to determine the best way to tell you,” she said sighing. “But everything I think of isn’t … exciting enough, I guess.”
“Exciting or not, now you have to tell me,” Bella said frowning a little as she gazed at Alice. “You can’t build something up like that and leave me hanging,” she continued, turning her head to the side, into Alice’s hand so that she could kiss her palm.
“No?” Alice asked lifting an eyebrow at Bella.
Bella shook her head and then leaned down pressing her lips against Alice’s before she murmured, “no,” against her lips.
“I had a session with Carlisle today,” Alice said when Bella pulled back, honey eyes focused completely on the younger woman.
Bella nodded, but remained silent. She knew when all of Alice’s sessions with Carlisle were. Much to her mortification, she’d even been forced to participate in some of them a month back.
She’d refused at first, what Alice had proposed was just too embarrassing to contemplate. But after thinking about it for a while, and having a very awkward conversation with Carlisle, she realized that it had to be done.
Those sessions had been very difficult for her, and for Alice. Alice had always done a very good job in the past keeping her vampire instincts under control, and while Bella had seen her struggle control herself, she had never seen Alice quite like she was in those sessions.
During the first session they’d had, on the second day of her period, Carlisle had actually had to tackle Alice and wrestle her to the floor, his arms and legs wrapping around her like a spider to keep her trapped while she growled and struggled, jet black eyes focused on Bella with an intensity and longing that was as beautiful as it was terrifying.
They’d continued to have multiple sessions a day for the next three days, and slowly Alice had improved, as Carlisle said she would.
His presence was crucial to the success of course. His ability to control Alice when she was overcome was the only reason Bella was able to stay in the room long enough to allow Alice to become used to the scent. But, finally, after two brutal days Alice had gained enough control that Carlisle holding her arm firmly was enough to stop her from advancing, and on the last day she had managed to keep herself in check without Carlisle restraining her, though she had stood rigidly, with her arms pressed tightly against her sides, her face contorted in a mask of agony for the whole half hour Bella had been in the room.
“It was the last one,” Alice said softly, holding Bella’s eyes as the words fell from her lips.
“The last,” Bella breathed out, her brows scrunching together before her eyes widened in realization. “You mean …?”
Alice nodded, her lips curving up in a wide, beautiful smile as Bella stared down at her, blinking in disbelief.
Bella’s head began to swim, shivers of excitement rippling through her as she tried to process the information. Alice had said the sessions were going well, but her first timetable had had them having to wait at least a year, maybe two, and Bella had thought that she would have to wait for quite a while longer before she could finally be turned.
But now, only six months after they had first talked it about, Alice was ready and Bella …
Alice gasped as Bella’s lips pressed against hers, her hand lifting to support Bella’s neck as the younger woman deepened the kiss. The touch was urgent and heady, and Alice lay back, allowing Bella to control the contact.
“When?” Bella breathed out, panting softly as she finally pulled away from Alice’s mouth.
“After we get back from Florida,” Alice said, reaching up to stroke Bella’s cheek.
Bella was due to head back to Forks the next day to spend Christmas with Charlie, and then they were due to head to Florida for New Year’s. She spoke to Renee and Charlie almost as often as Bella did, and she knew that they were both looking forward to the visits. Bella wouldn’t be able to be around them for quite some time after she was turned, and Alice wanted her to be able to enjoy one last visit with her parents as a human.
Bella’s lips parted to respond, but then she closed them and nodded.
The impatient teenage part of her wanted to demand that Alice change her then, right that minute, but she had done a lot of growing over the past year and she understood why Alice wanted to wait until after the Christmas vacation.
Her parents were looking forward to her visiting, and it would be the last time she would be able to see them as she was.
Later, months down the road, she would be able to see them again, but she would be different, changed, not just a product of Renee and Charlie, but of Alice as well. In a way, Christmas was the last chance for her parents to see their daughter as she was, and Bella wouldn’t take that opportunity away from Charlie, or Renee, or herself.
“After Florida,” Bella said softly.
“After Florida,” Alice repeated, her thumb tenderly stroking Bella’s cheek.
Bella lifted her hand to cover Alice’s, her gaze speculative as she looked at her lover.
“In a month …” she began, her voice trailing off as her eyes shifted to the side.
“What?” Alice prompted gently, pushing forward to press her lips against the corner of Bella’s mouth.
“We’ll be equal,” Bella said, her voice shaking a bit. “In a month we’ll be equal.”
Alice stared at Bella for a long moment. She wanted to say that they were equal already, that nothing would change between them after Bella was turned, but it was a lie, and she knew that Bella was aware of it. What she was, what they both were informed their every interaction.
After Bella was turned, she wouldn’t have to be careful not to hug Bella too tightly and break her ribs. And Bella wouldn’t have to worry that her nails would break off if she scratched at Alice’s back too hard. Bella would be able to stand up for herself and defend her position; she would no longer need Alice as an advocate, as a guardian for her. When they ran through the woods, Bella would be beside her, their hands twined together, instead of Bella being cradled in her arms as she ran.
Alice kissed Bella, and Bella sighed, collapsing into her embrace.
Bella’s hand trailed up Alice’s side, brushing against the swell of her breast a few seconds later.
“This is going to be different once I’m turned, isn’t it?” she asked, watching as her hand cupped Alice’s breast, her heart quickening as Alice breathed in sharply at the touch.
“Yes,” Alice said, her eyes fluttering shut as Bella’s thumb brushed over her nipple.
“How?” Bella asked curiously, her head dipping so that she could trace her lips along Alice’s neck.
“It’ll be warmer for you,” Alice said softly, her hand stroking Bella’s back softly. “I mean, I’ll feel normal to you,” she went on. “I won’t feel cold anymore.”
“That’ll be strange,” Bella whispered against Alice’s cool skin. “I’m so used to the temperature difference, I barely notice it anymore.”
“I think you’ll like the change,” Alice said softly, meeting Bella’s lips, luxuriating in her kiss for a minute. “You’ll shiver less at night.”
“I’d shiver forever if meant you were lying next to me,” she said, her eyes holding Alice’s.
“We’ll have forever,” Alice said smiling. “And I’ll be able to keep you warm.”
Bella leaned down and kissed her, her hands clutching at Alice’s shirt, needing to be connected to her as much as possible in that moment.
“We won’t get to sleep together anymore,” Bella said softly, “I didn’t mean it that way,” she added a moment later, swatting at Alice as the vampire raised a questioning eyebrow at her.
“Not sleep per say,” Alice admitted, snuggling against Bella. “But we do actually rest on the beds. Well, I do at least,” she continued smiling a little. Edward hadn’t had a bed in his room, but Edward was far more minimalist than she was, and unlike Edward she knew the benefits of a big bed and a firm mattress. “You’ll learn a little trick once you’re turned, a way of meditating that puts you into a semi-conscious state,” she went on, kissing Bella’s cheek. “It’s pleasant, and requires us to lie down, and most importantly provides plenty of opportunity to snuggle. It’s not quite what you do now, but it’s as close as we can get.”
“Why do y…” Bella began to ask.
“Staying up all night gets boring after a while,” Alice said making a face. “For the first year or so it’s great, and you’re productive, and all smug that you don’t need to sleep. But then you start collecting buttons, and scrap-booking, and memorizing the script to Tony Little infomercials. You start to think about buying a Bowflex even though you’re a vampire, and you end up with a dozen sets of Ginsu knives that never get used…”
“Because you’re a vampire,” Bella interjected softly, her lips curved up in a smile.
“Because you’re a vampire,” Alice confirmed nodding. “And when that happens, you realize that you’d kill to be able to shut your brain down for a couple hours.”
Bella laughed softly and brushed her lips against Alice’s.
“You’ll teach me?”
“Of course,” Alice murmured, her lips curling up. “It’s going to be great teaching you the ropes. We’re going to have tons of fun together! You know, when you’re not battling your insatiable lust for blood.”
Bella groaned, and glared at Alice. “Way to keep it real, Tink,” she moaned, still glaring at her lover.
“You need to remember that it’s not all sparkling in the sunlight, and running through woodland areas with the grace of a gazelle and the speed of a cheetah,” Alice murmured, her tone and words light, though her expression was serious. “It’s going to be very difficult for you at first.”
“I know,” Bella sighed, resting her head on the pillow beside Alice. “I’ve listened to the warnings, and the friendly talks, and the concerned chats. I have,” she went on. “I know what I’m getting into. I’m not afraid. This is what I want,” she finished taking Alice’s hand into hers.
“Good,” Alice said squeezing her hand, her head tilting in Bella’s direction. “Because …” she said, her eyes blinking rapidly. “I would have destroyed me … to watch as you slowly faded … I …” Alice stopped talking, her voice cutting out as her eyes squeezed shut. The thought alone was too terrible to bear; she couldn’t possibly force the words past her lips.
Bella leaned forward, pressing her lips against Alice’s as her arms wrapped around the vampire’s body, holding her tightly.
“I love you,” Alice said softly, her lips brushing against Bella’s as she spoke.
“I love you too,” Bella said smiling against Alice’s lips before she kissed her again.
“I told Ainsley we were just going to talk,” Alice murmured, her hands beginning to explore Bella’s sides.
“Well, I didn’t make any promises,” Bella said smirking as her hands slipped under Alice’s shirt. “And I’m through talking.”
Alice smiled and lay back, leaving herself in Bella’s warm, capable hands.
“You’re so cool,” Alice drawled, smiling brightly up at Bella.
“The coolest,” Bella responded, and then she found something much more productive to do with her lips.
To be continued …
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Date: 2008-12-23 03:46 am (UTC)"But then you start collecting buttons, and scrap-booking, and memorizing the script to Tony Little infomercials. You start to think about buying a Bowflex even though you’re a vampire, and you end up with a dozen sets of Ginsu knives that never get used…”-- Wow.
"it’s not all sparkling in the sunlight, and running through woodland areas with the grace of a gazelle and the speed of a cheetah"-- I like how you made the sparkling funny. I never thought that would make me smile... *growls at S. Myer*
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Date: 2008-12-23 03:52 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-23 03:53 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-23 04:07 am (UTC)Alice is ready YAyy!!!
And I love Alice teasing people
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Date: 2008-12-23 05:15 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-23 09:16 am (UTC)This chapter was great, I totally love.
Seeing Alice get in control was fabulous. I especially liked the flashback to the training session with Bella. You managed to make it clear again that it isn't as easy as it seems. That Alice has to fight really hard and that there are situations were she would even loose the fight for control.
(BTW did you see the movie? There's one scene where Bella is hurt and Alice IS trying to stay in control!)
Carlisle and Alice planning a tragic accident for Bella was really sweet, It's always handy to have a doctor in the house I guess!
“She’s had a bad fall. She slipped a disc,” Carlisle said meeting Alice’s eyes as she turned to look at him. “She’ll be bed ridden for weeks and confined to her home for months.”
“How tragic,” Alice murmured, her lips curving up in a smile.
“It’s extremely sad. Heartbreaking really,” Carlisle replied with a smile of his own.
I could really HEAR this conversation, with the undertones and the fake worry. Like two kids planning a prank.
And I totally loved Ainsley (West Wing??). The two of them bickering about is just priceless!
“Bella!” Ainsley yelled, stepping back from the open doorway to let Alice in. “Really-really-ridiculously-good-looking is here!”
“I’m really gonna have to look into changing my name,” Alice said stepping into the apartment room. “It’s a mouthful when introducing myself, and I’m beginning to think that the second ‘really’ is coming off a little arrogant,” she continued smirking at Ainsley who rolled her eyes and shut the door.
Greta job!
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Date: 2008-12-23 09:17 am (UTC)I really enjoyed that you didnt just skip to 'oh- youre done with training after blinking for one second!' and you actually showed that bit in the hospital- and the way you gave us a little insight into Bella's involvement in the training itself. Not that i doubted you would, it's one of the many things i love about your writing! I really liked that little bit with Alice joking around with Bella's roommate, it was filled with all sorts of Alice!cuteness :p
I am so excited for the actualy changing now!!!!
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Date: 2008-12-23 12:23 pm (UTC)I haven't read the books or seen the movie (though I'm looking forward to) but you with this awesome piece of love have turned me into the alice/bella team, and I love you so much for it.
You have been one of my favorite authors since "Audrey Can Wait", "Here We Go" and "Tango In D Minor" and after hesitating a little I started reading "The Edge". I must say I'm surprised that there's such imagination in one person's brain. :D
I'm looking forward to read more of this. TY!
P.S. I added as friend, since you write for most of my favorite pairing like waldsen, blackcest and belice.
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Date: 2008-12-23 10:31 pm (UTC)Best birthday present ever! You have no idea how excited I was when I saw you'd updated :D
Yay!
Date: 2008-12-23 11:06 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-23 11:58 pm (UTC)also. . .
YAAAAAAAAY!!!!
The Insanity strikes again
Date: 2008-12-25 10:34 pm (UTC)Re: The Insanity strikes again
Date: 2008-12-26 11:18 am (UTC)Re: The Insanity strikes again
Date: 2008-12-26 05:08 pm (UTC)Re: The Insanity strikes again
Date: 2008-12-26 05:09 pm (UTC)Re: The Insanity strikes again
Date: 2008-12-26 11:39 pm (UTC)Re: The Insanity strikes again
Date: 2008-12-27 11:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-24 02:36 am (UTC)OMG!
Date: 2008-12-24 02:56 am (UTC)You're awesome!
Bella and Alice are so damn cute together! And even though I love Jasper, I think he's acting like the third wheel, so maybe he should let them be happy?
*shrugs* Just a thought. :P
Anyway, I hope you update this soon. I'm loving it and I wanna see what happens next. :D
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Date: 2008-12-24 04:27 am (UTC)Are you brazilian?
I mean, your nick is THE most typical brazilian joke about english ever done.
Anyway, back to the fic.
I'm SO HAPPY! BEST Xtmas present, ever!
Thanks for that!
I loved the way you described the scene in the hospital and the apartment one was pretty funny as well :)
I'm glad Alice is finally ready!
Re: OMG!
Date: 2008-12-24 03:42 pm (UTC)Yep, I'm brazillian.
Re: OMG!
Date: 2008-12-24 03:57 pm (UTC)De boa, essa do puta que pariu em inglês é o mais famoso trocadilho cara haha
claro que ainda tem aqueles hot saw hot see (brilhante comunidade, btw), my withsixare, essas coisas...
coincidência!
passas teu Orkut, depois? ;)
ps: e eu aposto que você tem fake :B
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Date: 2008-12-24 06:35 pm (UTC)Mas o livejournal não queria aceitar nenhum dos outros nicks, então eu me estressei e acabou sendo esse mesmo. :P
Eu não tenho um fake! skopakspoakspo
Tava querendo fazer um, mas só pra juntar comunidade. ;)
Vou passar!
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Date: 2008-12-25 06:38 am (UTC)Ah, ok (: Vais na comunidade da Kristen?
Re: OMG!
Date: 2008-12-25 02:38 pm (UTC)mas aí já é outra coisa difereeente! ;)
Vou sim! Vou deixar o link nos seus comentários!
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Date: 2008-12-24 05:42 am (UTC)Even though I can't wait to see vamp Bella, I'm going to miss the dynamic they have now, mostly because i love Protective!Alice. It will be nice to see them on a more equal footing though.
Ainsley's awesome, she should stick around. ;)
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Date: 2008-12-24 11:33 pm (UTC)“I’m really gonna have to look into changing my name,” Alice said stepping into the apartment room. “It’s a mouthful when introducing myself, and I’m beginning to think that the second ‘really’ is coming off a little arrogant,” she continued smirking at Ainsley who rolled her eyes and shut the door.
Favorite part...y'know, besides the whole ALICE IS DONE WITH HER TRAINING!!!!!!! bit.
Hee! I'm excited for the turning. :)
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Date: 2008-12-25 10:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-26 12:13 am (UTC)lol i love this.
and this! hell, yes!
yes, Alice is ready! i just love that Alice wins over everyone she meets. i want to be just like Alice. :D
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Date: 2008-12-26 07:29 am (UTC)And with that said, yay updates! :]
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Date: 2008-12-26 07:57 am (UTC)I mean, dayum.
noses in
Date: 2008-12-26 11:20 am (UTC)Re: noses in
Date: 2008-12-27 04:55 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-26 09:16 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-27 07:20 am (UTC)Loved the back and forth with Ainsley, great character btw. Alice just owns and I love how she won over Bella's roomate with her sheer adorableness. Also, the banter between Alice and Carlisle about the plan for Bella's fake injury was funny and sweet and just all around awesomesauce. Can't wait to see Alice turn her!
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Date: 2008-12-28 04:56 pm (UTC)That said, can I just compliment the awesomeness? Seriously. Everything just fits perfectly in place, and Edward not being there is such a fuckin' blessing I don't even know how to pay for that, hahah.
Hope the next part's coming soon :D
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Date: 2009-01-05 02:03 am (UTC)I can't wait to get Jasper out of the picture but I'm sure that will come in time. I love how you've depicted the love between Alice and Bella... You have true talent and I can't wait to read more soon!