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Title: 
Turnabout is Fair Play
Author:
  Janine
Fandom:  Percy Jackson and the Olympians
Pairing:  Annabeth/Clarisse
Rating:  NC-17
Disclaimer:  I don’t own them.
Summary:
 A sparing match between Annabeth and Clarisse gets out of hand and leads them to a place that neither expected.
Prompt: Annabeth/Clarisse. Biting, dominance struggle ... A fight/argument turns into a game turns into an awkward sense of camaraderie turns into super awkward fumbling sex ... Bonus points if they've both been turned on while fighting in the past and just hid it by being extra nasty-mean... for the [livejournal.com profile] pjo_kinkmeme

Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 1

PART II

"You win.  I got lucky.  You rule, I drool," Annabeth groaned trying to force her body to relax even though all she wanted to do was just arch up into Clarisse's hand again and again until she came.  "Please let go of me.  I'm not challenging you, I just want to get up," she continued, her voice cracking as she turned her head away from Clarisse, blinking rapidly in an attempt to control the tears she could feel welling up in her eyes as her embarrassment grew to almost unmanagable proportions.

“Are you crying?” Clarisse asked softly.

“No,” Annabeth responded though from the tremulous quality of her voice it was clear that if she wasn’t already crying she was close to it.

Clarisse breathed in deeply as she realized how upset Annabeth actually was and immediately released the grey eyed girl’s hands.  She then shifted her weight off of Annabeth and settled down onto the grass, kneeling beside the humiliated blonde. 

Annabeth sat up quickly, as if she was afraid that Clarisse would change her mind.  She tugged her shirt down so that she looked relatively presentable again, but she was still feeling too shaky to deal with Clarisse’s taunts and she drew her knees up and wrapped her arms around them hugging them protectively to her body.

“I’m sorry,” Clarisse said uncomfortably, her eyes focused on the ground as she spoke.  “I shouldn’t have touched you.”

“We were fighting,” Annabeth murmured keeping her eyes averted from the warrior despite Clarisse’s gentle tone.

“That’s not what I meant,” Clarisse responded shifting uncomfortably once again.

“I know,” Annabeth breathed out.

“I wouldn’t ... I wouldn’t have, you know, done anything to you,” Clarisse murmured awkwardly.  “I was just surprised and I didn’t think.  I just pressed the advantage.”

Annabeth made a pained sound in her throat and buried her face in her arms, hiding her face entirely from Clarisse.  She really didn’t want to talk about it.  She and Clarisse didn’t always get along, but the daughter of Ares had a sense of honour and she hadn’t been worried about Clarisse molesting her.  She was just beyond embarrassed by the fact that fighting with the warrior had aroused her enough that Clarisse had noticed, let alone the fact that it had aroused her enough to actually hump the warrior’s hand.

“Its fine,” Annabeth said speaking into her arms though her voice was loud enough she knew Clarisse would hear “Don’t worry about it.  And,” Annabeth paused and sucked in a deep breath, “I’m sorry too,” she said quickly trying to burrow even further into her arms.  “For getting all ... weird,” she continued not quite being able to force herself to say what she really had been.

“It’s not weird,” Clarisse said gently, reaching out to rest her hand on Annabeth’s shoulder though she quickly removed it when Annabeth’s body tensed.  “It’s really normal actually,” she continued awkwardly.  “Fighting is foreplay for most of my cabin.”

Hesitantly, Annabeth lifted her head so that her chin was resting on her arms and she could see Clarisse.

“Really?” she asked softly.

“Really,” Clarisse responded nodding.  “Maybe our parents are more alike than people think,” she continued allowing a small smile to touch her lips as she glanced over at Annabeth. 

Annabeth smiled at little at that but was still too self-conscious to joke back.

“I ...” Clarisse said suddenly, but when Annabeth’s eyes lifted to meet hers again she stopped talking and looked away awkwardly.

“Listen, you don’t have to stay and talk to me,” Annabeth said figuring that it had to be kind of weird for Clarisse sitting there on the ground next to her trying to make her feel better about uncontrollably humping her.  “I know you probably want to take off.  Don’t worry, I’m not going to tie a boulder to my leg and jump in the pond.  You can leave.”

“No, it’s not that,” Clarisse said, her eyebrows furrowing in consternation.  “I mean, I didn’t think that ... I was just going to say ... I mean ... did you like it?”

Annabeth blinked slowly.  “Excuse me?”

Clarisse blushed deeply, her cheeks flushing red so swiftly that Annabeth blinked in surprise.

“When I touched you,” Clarisse responded, her skin still bright red though to her credit she managed to meet Annabeth’s eyes.  “It seemed like you liked it and I was just wondering if you did ... like it,” she went on clumsily.

“Why do you want to know?” Annabeth asked slowly as an idea started to form in her mind.

Clarisse was silent for a long moment and she averted her eyes from Annabeth’s again, her skin still flushed bright red.

“You liked it too, didn’t you?” Annabeth said releasing her legs from the death hold she’d had on them.

She would have thought that at the first opportunity presented to her Clarisse would have taken off to announce to the entire camp that Annabeth Chase was a sexual deviant, but instead Clarisse had stayed and been nice.  She had tried to comfort and reassure her, because she knew what Annabeth was feeling because she felt it too. 

“That’s why you kept touching me.  My reactions excited you,” Annabeth breathed out.

Clarisse kept her head turned but nodded.

At first she had just been planning to use Annabeth’s reaction to her as a way to get one up on the blonde and humiliate a little of her Athenian smugness out of her, but seeing how Annabeth reacted to her touch began to get to her, and the last time she had grinded her palm against Annabeth it had been with the express purpose of getting her to make one of those delicious sounds again.

“I liked it,” Annabeth said a little breathlessly, her heart picking up speed in her chest.  “When you touched me,” Annabeth clarified when Clarisse finally looked over at her.  “It felt good.  Really good.  I was embarrassed and wanted you to stop, but at the same time I wanted you to keep going because,” the grey eyed girl paused and bit down on her bottom lip, chewing on it lightly for a moment before she whispered, “it felt really good.”

Clarisse breathed out roughly and looked at Annabeth speculatively.

“Are you still...?” Clarisse asked, her eyes dropping down to Annabeth’s crotch making the meaning of her uncompleted question quite clear.

“Yeah,” Annabeth responded breathily. 

Her arousal had cooled after Clarisse had climbed off of her and had waned even more as they talked, but it had spiked up again when she realized that Clarisse had been turned on too, and as she described her reaction to Clarisse’s touches she had been remembering them and it had got her going all over again.

“Me too,” Clarisse rasped sliding closer to Annabeth and tentatively placing her hand on her thigh.  “Can I ...?” she continued, letting the question trail off as she rubbed Annabeth’s thigh suggestively.

Annabeth shivered in anticipation.  She knew that she should say no.  She knew that she should gently remove Clarisse’s hand and say ‘thank you, but no’ before she got up and headed back to camp.  She knew these things, but she didn’t feel them.  What she felt was hot, and tingly, and wet, and reckless.  What she felt was the throbbing between her legs, the aching that Clarisse had so nearly taken care of for her earlier.

“Yeah,” Annabeth nodded and then she reached out for the hand Clarisse had on her thigh and dragged it between her legs putting it right back where it had been before she had asked Clarisse to stop.

“Do you want to go somewhere else?” Clarisse asked distractedly, breathing in deeply as the heat between Annabeth’s legs seared her palm and made her very aware of the pulsing need between her own legs.

“Yes,” Annabeth breathed out.  They were out in the open.  They were far enough away from the main part of the camp that nobody was likely to stumble upon them, but they were still out in the open which was risky. 

Clarisse started to remove her hand but Annabeth reached out and grasped her wrist, stopping her.

“It’s just ...” Annabeth blushed deeply as Clarisse looked at her questioningly.  “I don’t think I can wait,” she finally choked out.

Clarisse’s eyes darkened and hooded and a low, rumbling moan escaped from her throat.

“Can I kiss you?” Clarisse asked tremulously.

Annabeth licked her lips and nodded.

“Lie down,” Clarisse gently instructed.

Annabeth obeyed and when she was lying on the grassy earth the warrior stretched herself out beside Annabeth and propped herself up on one arm.  Clarisse then pressed her hand firmly between Annabeth’s legs again and proceeded to rotate the heel of her hand in hard circles.

Annabeth gasped and moaned and her free hand moved to cover the one that was still holding Clarisse’s wrist, and then she used both of her hands to help press Clarisse’s hand against her even harder.

Clarisse’s inner-muscles clenched powerfully as Annabeth held her hand against her and the warrior knew that her panties had just become even damper.  Annabeth man-handling her to make it easier for herself to hump Clarisse’s hand was just too hot for words.

Annabeth felt Clarisse moving closer to her and turned her head to meet the warrior’s lips in a heated kiss.  She hadn’t thought that anything could feel better than Clarisse’s hand against her, but feeling Clarisse’s tongue in her mouth, stroking her own and sucking on it as the warrior ground her palm against her was indescribable. 

“Oh gods,” Clarisse groaned into Annabeth’s mouth minutes later, her hand still working steadily between the grey eyed girls legs, “you’ve soaked through,” Clarisse gasped, stopping the hard grinding of her palm so that she could run her fingers along the covered length of Annabeth’s sex. 

The black leggings were too dark for her to see a wet spot, but oh could she feel it. 

“Sorry,” Annabeth gasped, not quite sure what to say in response to Clarisse’s words.  She knew that she was wet and getting wetter by the second but she was honestly surprised to hear that she’d soaked through two layers.

“Don’t apologize,” Clarisse murmured stroking Annabeth as she spoke.  “It’s fucking hot,” she groaned, lowering her lips to Annabeth’s neck to suck and nip at the skin she found there.  “You’re turning me on so much,” she breathed out, licking a path up Annabeth’s neck before returning her lips to Annabeth’s.

Annabeth understood the feeling.  The things Clarisse was doing between her legs were making her feel amazing, and she had very little control over what her body was doing.  She was moaning almost constantly into Clarisse’s mouth and her hips would undulate and lift up into Clarisse’s hand begging for everything the warrior could give her.  Her whole world at that moment consisted of Clarisse’s hand, her lips, her tongue, and warmth of her body pressed against her.  She was out of her mind with horniness.

“Don’t stop,” Annabeth gasped, desperately reaching out for Clarisse’s hand when she felt it slip from between her legs.

“I’m not,” Clarisse said kissing Annabeth again as she brought her hand to the top of the grey eyed girl’s leggings and then slipped it beneath both that and her panties so her fingers were trailing through damp blonde curls and pressing into velvety, warm flesh.

“Oh,” Annabeth gasped as she felt Clarisse’s fingers on her most intimate flesh.

“Better?” Clarisse asked, stroking along the length of Annbeth’s sex, gathering and spreading her juices.

“Mm,” Annabeth murmured, squirming against Clarisse’s hand, “please.”

The warrior’s fingers found Annabeth’s engorged clit and began to circle.  Annabeth cried out loudly, so loudly in fact that Clarisse worried for a moment that someone might’ve heard, but as Annabeth started to whimper and one of her hands moved to her chest and began to squeeze at her own breast and pull at her own nipple, Clarisse thought of nothing but Annabeth and wanted nothing but to see the blonde cum. 

“Clarisse,” Annabeth gasped, completely out of her mind with pleasure.  “Clarisse, oh gods, oh gods, oh gods, oh ...!”

Annabeth’s eyes squeezed shut and tears leaked from the corners of her eyes as her body arched up one last time and her hips began to buck quickly, riding every moment of pleasure out of Clarisse’s fingers as she could.

Annabeth’s eyes snapped open and her body sank down into the grass, little shivers running through her body as her chest rose and fell in rapid pants and her inner-muscles clenched and released as aftershocks traveled through her body.

Slowly, Annabeth turned her head to the side to look up at Clarisse.  Her cheeks were flushed and her body still trembled as she met the warrior’s eyes and a large smile spread across Annabeth’s face.  She felt great. 

“That was,” Clarisse breathed out, her fingers still very lightly stroking Annabeth, “the sexiest thing I have ever seen.  I came watching you,” she related breathlessly, her eyelids fluttering in pleasure when Annabeth’s hand fell to cover the one Clarisse hand in her pants so that she could keep Clarisse’s hand where it was for a while longer. 

Annabeth closed her eyes, enjoying the feel of Clarisse’s hand on her as she took a few moments to try and calm her breathing enough that she could speak.  When she felt somewhat settled she drew her hand away from Clarisse’s and began to speak. 

“I,” Annabeth began, pausing at the raspy and unfamiliar sound of her voice, “I,” she started again clearing her throat, “was hoping to be able to return the favour,” she continued shivering when Clarisse finally pulled her hand out of Annbeth’s pants. 

“You can,” Clarisse said with a smile before she leaned down and pressed her lips to Annabeth’s softly.  “I’m already hot for you again,” she practically purred as she played Annabeth’s orgasm through her mind again. 

A moment later Clarisse’s body tensed and she turned her head to the side, listening. 

“Can you stand?” she asked Annabeth holding out her hand to her and then quickly taking it back and offering the hand that wasn’t slick with Annabeth’s juices to her.  “There are people coming, we should get out of here.” 

Annabeth accepted the warrior’s hand and allowed Clarisse to help her to her feet.  Her breathing had returned to normal, but she was still a bit unsteady on her feet. 

“There’s a cave a close by, I found it a few years ago but never told anyone about it.  The entrance is really well hidden so nobody else has found it.  I like to go there sometimes to be alone.  I could show you.  I mean we could use it to ...” 

“Okay,” Annabeth agreed quickly not needing to be coaxed into going with Clarisse. 

Clarisse smiled at her widely in response and Annabeth blushed realizing that her response might have been a tad too quick. 

“What I meant was that I’d love to visit your secret cave,” Annabeth said. 

Clarisse outright laughed at that and Annabeth blushed more deeply releasing how unintentionally dirty that had sounded...and because it was true.   

“Let’s just go,” Annabeth muttered. 

“It’s this way,” Clarisse said looking at Annabeth before she tentatively reached out for her hand, her body relaxing a moment later when Annabeth squeezed her hand comfortingly and held onto it tightly. 

Clarisse looked over at Annabeth before they began to walk and smiled a sweet, shy smile the likes of which Annabeth had never seen on her face before.  Annabeth’s heart clenched powerfully beneath her chest, and as she looked into Clarisse’s eyes she felt her own lips curve up into a beauteous smile as well. 

The End

P.S.  There is a companion piece to this story Omniscience Sucks by [info]lightbluenym that you should totes check out!

Date: 2010-03-17 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bebopsamurai.livejournal.com
OMGGAWDILOVEYOU.

Seriously. This was just...kalkjdfajeoofkal ♥ So perfect and in-character. I flirted with the idea of this couple before but after this I can TOTALLY see it as a possibility XD

Loved Annabeth's little dirty joke (LOLWHAT) and loved LOVED the detailed description of Clarisse's musculature just a bit too much /D

Date: 2010-03-18 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
*smile*

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

I flirted with the idea of this couple before but after this I can TOTALLY see it as a possibility XD

I get this. The idea of these two was always in the back of head but it wasn't until I actually wrote them that I was like 'yeah, this feels pretty right'. Although, after finishing the last book, I kind of ship Clarisse/Silena as well.

and loved LOVED the detailed description of Clarisse's musculature just a bit too much /D

God, I loved writing those descriptions so there's no need to strike it out.

Image

this is pretty much how I picture Clarisse's physique and ... RAWR.

In fact here's another one just because, lol

Image
Edited Date: 2010-03-18 05:42 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-03-18 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bebopsamurai.livejournal.com
I kind of got that vibe early on (the 'boob grab' back in Book 2 pretty much did it for me XD), but there wasn't a lot of interaction for me to build something on in canon at least. I really liked the whole Clarisse/Silena "friendship", but I do kind of wish Silena had been developed a bit more in the earlier books, or that their relationship hadn't basically been built up offscreen. I REALLY wanna write fic for them though. XD

.... RAWR INDEED ♥______♥ *has an unhealthy crush on Jillian Michaels*

Great, now I'm gonna see Clarisse as her whenever I read the books, thanks a lot for that ♥♥♥♥

Date: 2010-03-18 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
the 'boob grab' back in Book 2 pretty much did it for me XD

OMG, I don't even remember this. Refresh my memory plz!!!!

but there wasn't a lot of interaction for me to build something on in canon at least.

Yeah, I know. I definitely would have liked to see how they kind of made up, like I remember Percy coming back to camp and being surprised that they were being civil to each other. I know the first person perspective limits the ability to showcase the supporting characters, but like a page of dialogue or something could of helped.

If I have a complaint about the series its that the characters bafflingly didn't talk to each other about relatively important things for no real reason other than plot convenience.

I really liked the whole Clarisse/Silena "friendship", but I do kind of wish Silena had been developed a bit more in the earlier books, or that their relationship hadn't basically been built up offscreen.

Me too. I mean I get it since Percy was away from camp a lot and by his own admission didn't really pay much attention to the other campers when he was there. But still. Especially considering the role Silena played later, more mentions of her at the beginning of the series would have been good.

I REALLY wanna write fic for them though. XD

Me too. I just can't really figure out what to write yet :( You should check out this fic She Does (http://community.livejournal.com/grabi_hands/29841.html) though. It's Clarisse/Silena and it really made them kind of OTP for me.

*has an unhealthy crush on Jillian Michaels*


I don't see how it's possible not to have an insane crush on this woman. *thinks about Jillian and melts into a puddle of goo*

now I'm gonna see Clarisse as her whenever I read the books, thanks a lot for that ♥♥♥♥

You're welcome :D


Date: 2010-03-18 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wotchdisspace.livejournal.com
OMG, I don't even remember this. Refresh my memory plz!!!!

I'm gonna quote the book, just because.

Pg. 212 (where Annabeth has just been tossed like a rag-doll by the Cyclops)
"Clarisse dropped next to her and felt her chest, which made Annabeth gasp." <-- Clarisse claims she was checking to see if she had broken anything. Suuuuure you were.

Oh also also, afterwords, Clarisse totally picked Annabeth up and carried her to the ship. Such a gentleman.

Memory refreshed?

Date: 2010-03-19 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Ah yes, memory is most definitely refreshed. I remember squeeing so hard at that part. Especially the Clarisse picking up Annabeth and carrying her to safety. So fucking dreamy.

And now ... I'll be in my bunk!

Date: 2010-03-18 09:19 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-03-17 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wotchdisspace.livejournal.com
WHOA.

Sorry for shouting, but I've been waiting for Percy Jackson femslash ever since I read the 3rd one (That darn thing was so slashy!) And this certainly didn't disappoint! Thank you :)

Date: 2010-03-18 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
since I read the 3rd one (That darn thing was so slashy!)

Heh. I know. Oh, Artemis. I knew I could count on you to be super gay.

Thanks so much for commenting, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. One thing I like about this series is that there are tons of strong female characters (the only thing that really bugged me was Annabeth acting all mean girls to Rachel, but I'mma chalk it up to sexual tension, lol)

P.S. Great icon. I'm shipping those two so hard already. Both movie!Joan and Cherie and Dakota/KStew, lol

Date: 2010-03-17 06:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] headintheair.livejournal.com
Thank you for this! I've been dying for some fic with this pairing. I love Annabeth, and Clarisse's character screamed "lesbian" in the books. Too bad she wasn't in the movie. You captured both characters' competitive natures well, as well as that thin line between anger and lust. Sparring with a hot girl should always lead to sex, imo. ;)

Date: 2010-03-18 05:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
I've been dying for some fic with this pairing.

I know. I kind of love these two together, cause fighting/antagonism = hot hot sex. The internetz taught me this.

and Clarisse's character screamed "lesbian" in the books.

This. So much. Clarisse was obviously a gaymo, and the reason she picked on Annabeth was because Annabeth made her question her sexuality. The whole Chris thing in the books was like O_o. I just wish that Clarisse/Silena had gotten more time together and their love affair had been able to fully blossom, cause if they weren't doing it they should have been. *sigh*

Sparring with a hot girl should always lead to sex, imo. ;)

Word.

Date: 2010-03-18 07:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bebopsamurai.livejournal.com
SO MUCH THIS on the Chris thing. I didn't hate the guy or anything (hell for an Ares kid he seemed really nice though... we barely saw him), but it struck me as a bit inconsistent that Clarisse basically admits to caring about this guy a lot and is so relieved when he turns out to be okay at the end of book 4... and then she spends pretty much the entirety of book 5 barely interacting with him, despite them ostensibly being a 'couple' now. Hell, I don't think he even gets to TALK that much now that I think about it...

In terms of the character, it could have been that she was trying to come to grips with her sexuality and Chris was her way of 'checking' herself though a really cynical part of me thinks that Riordan got a letter or something asking about Clarisse, he panicked and shoehorned in a 'relationship' for her as if to say SEE SEE SHE'S TOTALLY NOT GAY and then completely forgot about it somehow XD

Date: 2010-03-18 07:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
I didn't hate the guy or anything (hell for an Ares kid he seemed really nice though... we barely saw him), but it struck me as a bit inconsistent

this. Chris did seem like a decent guy, which ironically actually made it even harder for me to buy him with Clarisse. Not because he was nice, but because he seemed kind of weak. Like I can't see Clarisse with a boyfriend at all, let alone one who likes to talk about his feelings and goes crazy after being in a maze for a while.

In terms of the character, it could have been that she was trying to come to grips with her sexuality and Chris was her way of 'checking' herself

This is really how it came across to me, like her friendship with Silena began to make her nervous. Silena flying back to 'talk to Clarisse' also struck me as really gay. Like if her 'boyfriend' couldn't convince her, why did people think Silena could? Oh yeah, cause Clarisse was mad gay for her.

though a really cynical part of me thinks that Riordan got a letter or something asking about Clarisse, he panicked and shoehorned in a 'relationship' for her as if to say SEE SEE SHE'S TOTALLY NOT GAY and then completely forgot about it somehow XD

As sad as it is, I feel like this might be true. Like considering that nothing was done with the relationship (I mean, it was Silena in one way or another that got the Ares cabin into the fight) I don't really see why it had to be in there at all. Like, just let people speculate about her. Nobody told him he had to give her a girlfriend.

A lot of the relationships seem shoehorned in there, like Riordan was told he had to have couples so that girls would read the books too. I mean, Silena/Beckendorff came out of nowhere as well. Luke/Thalia was like hinted at but then it's like Riordan got bored with that half-assed subtext as well. Grover and Juniper was like 'Whaaa?'

I didn't really give a shit about most of the relationships in these books though (I did really like Luke/Annabeth and was kind of into Percy/Rachel, and Sally/Paul was okay).

Percy/Annabeth at the end felt really forced to me, like Riordan thought he HAD to get them together. IRL I feel like they'd break up within 6 months of getting together. The communication between the two of them was so piss poor, like they never seemed to be able to really talk to each other which killed a romantic vibe between them for me.

I feel like he was just trying to write a fun adventure series, and then people were trying to get him to Twilight-ize it to maximize profit.

Still, the romantic plots were so minor that the randomness of them really didn't impact my enjoyment of anything.

Date: 2010-03-17 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raven-christina.livejournal.com
Whoa. That was hot enough to make me log in and leave a proper comment. Wonderful as always darling. :D

Date: 2010-03-18 05:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
lol! I'm very pleased that you logged in. Thanks! And I'm happy that you enjoyed the smex :D

Date: 2010-03-18 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mandala.livejournal.com
I'll be in my bunk...apparently reading Percy Jackson (got the third book today!) and thinking about this fic while I do.

Date: 2010-03-18 05:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Heh. The creation of this story made my bunk see quite a bit of me, lol.

Enjoy the third book, I think that's the one with Artemis (which is super subtextually gay). It's such a fun series.

Date: 2010-03-18 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] musicffyou.livejournal.com
that was so freaking awesome. I've never read or watched the movie but this made me actually go do some research into these characters just so I could get it right.

You are amazing. You always write fandom for things I've never read before but you actually make me want to....ok not true because I know they wont be as good as your writing lol

Date: 2010-03-19 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
I think there is a very, very good chance of this happening :D

Date: 2010-03-19 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] musicffyou.livejournal.com
Can I get that in percentage form lol
There is a 95% chance of this happening..yes..yes?

Date: 2010-03-19 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Honestly, there's like a 100% chance of it happening ;) It's already mostly finished!

Date: 2010-03-20 12:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] musicffyou.livejournal.com
I vote for you to become the Goddess of Awesomeness. Is there someone I can send a letter to request that? lol

Can't wait to read it :D

Date: 2010-03-21 03:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lightbluenym.livejournal.com
I second this vote... :)

Date: 2010-03-18 05:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! I'm blushing like I'm Annabeth or something ;)

I'm really happy that you enjoyed the story. And you should totally check out the book series. It's a really fun series, and it doesn't take a nose-dive at the end like some book series.

Date: 2010-03-18 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noangel2046.livejournal.com
OOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
THAT'S HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm reading the second book now ,i'm gonna finish it today,and get the third slashy one!!!!hahahahhah~~~

Date: 2010-03-18 05:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
:D Ooh, caplocks! Thank you very much!

And yeah, the third book is amazingly fun because of Artemis and her harem of kickass hunters. Seriously, the hunters are so gay. I just pretended that they were in their late teens instead of early teens and it was a pretty sweet ride, lol.

Date: 2010-03-21 05:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noangel2046.livejournal.com
Zoe&Artemis
Artemis&Athena
Talia&Artemis
Zoe&Talia
Annabeth&Talia
Annabeth&Artemis
OMG,these ladies, i so in love with them~

Date: 2010-03-18 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] agarza1538.livejournal.com
i have been waiting for you to write a percy jackson fic for a while and i can say i was in no way disappointed. Thank you

Date: 2010-03-18 05:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
lol! I'm glad that it was worth the wait. Now that I've popped my PJO cherry, I want to write more. The damn muse just isn't coperating. I should probably go back to that kink meme and see if it can give me any more ideas, lol

Date: 2010-03-18 05:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chepis.livejournal.com
I love it, it was perfect. The banter between them was funny and the tension was so good.

“What I meant was that I’d love to visit your secret cave,” Annabeth said.
This. Best line

And apparently I've to read the books, if only for the vibes Clarisse gives :)

Date: 2010-03-18 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, and that they were in character *wipes brow*

This. Best line

Heh. I've been in the midst of a "That's what she said" phase, so unintentionally dirty things have been coming out of my mouth (and keyboard) all the time.

And apparently I've to read the books, if only for the vibes Clarisse gives :)

She's irritating as hell at first, but she definitely grows on you. She's got a good heart that one, and a couple books in you just want to hug her, and squeeze her, and be thrown down on the mat by her and ... um, I'll be in my bunk.

P.S. The series is really fun as well. I would definitely recommend it.

Date: 2010-03-18 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katmarajade.livejournal.com
This is fantastic! I absolutely love it! I love Clarisse here-- she's so in character and amazing. All musclely and gorgeous and hot... mmmm... And I love that she's so genuinely surprised that Annabeth is turned on by her.

Date: 2010-03-18 06:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it :D

All musclely and gorgeous and hot... mmmm...

Mmm, Clarisse.

And I love that she's so genuinely surprised that Annabeth is turned on by her.

There's something in that relative innocence mixed with her physical strength and aggression that makes Clarisse very, very appealing.

Date: 2010-03-18 09:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pada-something.livejournal.com
okay so this was possibly the best thing about tonight's insomnia. i just--it's really well written and hot and fierce and perfect and sexy and i reallyyyyyyyyyyyy love it.

Date: 2010-03-19 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Aw, I'm sorry to hear about the insomnia. that's the pits. I'm glad that the story gave you something to do to occupy the time though!

Thanks so much for responding, and I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.

Date: 2010-03-18 09:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prunesquallormd.livejournal.com
Well, damn.
This was really lovely, and very, very hot.Annabeth's initial confusion and embarrassment just made it all the more so.
*fans self*

A very nice way to start the day :)

I've only seen the film of Percy Jackson, which was disappointing. Must give the books a look.
Edited Date: 2010-03-18 09:41 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-03-19 06:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it :D

.Annabeth's initial confusion and embarrassment just made it all the more so.

Heh. I don't really know why that is, but I found her embarrassment to be really hot too. And, well, we know Clarisse did as well, lol.

I've only seen the film of Percy Jackson, which was disappointing. Must give the books a look.

You should definitely give teh books a read. They're really good, fun and entertaining and quick reads. Part of the problem with the movie was that they left a bunch of stuff from the books out, and then changed a whole bunch of stuff for no real reason. The books are mint, two thumbs up for them.

Date: 2010-03-18 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lightbluenym.livejournal.com
Just thought I'd remind you that I love this :). Thanks for the shout out!

Date: 2010-03-19 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
*smile*

Thanks for the shout out!

No problem, I like to share awesome things :D

Date: 2010-03-21 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lightbluenym.livejournal.com
Aww, shucks... :)

Date: 2010-03-19 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orange-creative.livejournal.com
Haven't read the books or seen the movie. Now I have a great desire to because of this fic. Fight!sex always ends so... satisfying.

And chicks with arm muscles... Well, it's like the equivalent of knowing a guy has a big dick. Everytime I see a girl with niiiiiice arms, I just want to walk up to her and say, "You wanna show me how you like to flex those forearms?" EVEN IF THEY'VE NEVER USED IT, YOU CAN TEACH THEM HOW.

Date: 2010-03-19 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Haven't read the books or seen the movie. Now I have a great desire to because of this fic.

You should definitely check out the books. They are super fun and entertaining. The movie is alright as well, but the book series is definitely far superior. the movie gives you some nice visuals though.

Fight!sex always ends so... satisfying.

Truth. There's something so sexy about when that thin line between lust and hate gets blurred.

And chicks with arm muscles... Well, it's like the equivalent of knowing a guy has a big dick.

LOL! Then Clarisse is a total stud. The author of the books even kept mentioning her awesome arm muscles. I think he totally wanted fans to write smutty fanfic about her!

Awesome again

Date: 2010-03-27 06:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] palistus.livejournal.com
It's even better the second time reading it! Was browsing this site for Percy Jackson femslash and saw this, figured might as well give it another read, epic.

What I love about this series is that EVERY pairing works! Somehow this series even got me to read... het o.0 no series has done that in a long while, bt pairings like this prove that in this book, ANYTHING goes. :P

Now, off to find Zoe/Thalia or Zoe/Artemis, or even... Annabeth/Thalia :P

Re: Awesome again

Date: 2010-03-27 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com
Somehow this series even got me to read... het o.0 no series has done that in a long while, bt pairings like this prove that in this book, ANYTHING goes. :P


lol! I understand this so much. This series totally got me to read het pairing too which is beyond rare, but I'm kind of into Luke/Annabeth and Luke/Thalia, and Luke/Me lol. Crazy.

There still needs to me more femslash for the series though. The M/M slashers always get so much more fic than we femslashers do *woe*

Re: Awesome again

Date: 2010-03-27 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] palistus.livejournal.com
'but I'm kind of into Luke/Annabeth and Luke/Thalia, and Luke/Me lol. Crazy.'

Hahaha, you mentioned the one person I'd never read with anyone! Luke is kinda my exception, I don't like him in pairings for some reason, idk why.

'There still needs to me more femslash for the series though. The M/M slashers always get so much more fic than we femslashers do *woe*'

seriously! On FF.net there's like no femslash about this, it's rather annoying! People need to start seeing the epic possibilities.

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