All characters are owned by Stephanie Meyer. I’m just borrowing them.
An Hour Later
Bella sighed as Alice moved her head to rest on her shoulder, her eyelids fluttering contently as Alice’s finger danced nimbly along her side.
Taking a shower had definitely been a good idea.
When she had come back to her room dressed for bed, Alice had been lying on her bed waiting for her, a small bag that hadn’t been with her before resting on the floor by Bella’s dresser. Bella had smiled brightly at her upon seeing it, understanding that it meant Alice intended to stay with her for as long as she was in town, and she had quickly made her way over to the bed. Then, the moment she had settled down on the mattress Alice had shimmied over to her and breathed in deeply, a beautiful smile coming to her lips as Bella’s, and only Bella’s, scent washed over her. Alice had embraced her immediately after that, and since then, Alice hadn’t stopped touching her … a development that Bella couldn’t have been happier about.
“He’s how old?” Alice asked softly, a hint of a whine in her voice as her fingers trailed along Bella’s ribcage, affectionately exploring.
“Sixteen,” Bella responded, trying to ignore Alice as the vampire pressed against her side and groaned piteously, hiding her head against Bella’s shoulders.
Ignoring her was easier said than done however, because with Alice pressed even closer to her, Bella became absolutely certain that her companion was not wearing a bra, and the feel of Alice’s breasts pressed against her arm, a hard nipple rubbing against her, separated from her flesh by only by a very thin tank top, was very, very difficult not to concentrate on.
“Ugh, even worse,” Alice mumbled against Bella’s should. “A baby werewolf,” she groaned propping herself up so that she could shake her head at Bella. “You really are a magnet for trouble, aren’t you?” she asked shaking her head. “If there’s a well, you’ll fall into it. If there’s a bear trap, you’ll step in it. If there’s a banana peel, you’ll slip on it. If there’s a werewolf, you’ll invite it home for lasagna,” she moaned dropping her head back down to Bella’s shoulder. “Unbelievable,” she sighed.
“Are you done?” Bella asked smiling, more amused than insulted by Alice’s little outburst.
“I suppose so,” Alice murmured rubbing against the length of Bella’s body like a spoiled tuxedo cat. “I don’t imagine you’re going to listen to anything I have to say on the subject anyway,” she sighed snuggling against to Bella. “Besides,” she went on, her voice gentling, “he saved your life. So I can’t really be anything but eternally grateful to him.”
Bella’s heart warmed at Alice’s words.
“You’re a very smooth operator,” Bella said pressing a kiss to the top of Alice’s head, a powerful longing welling up inside of her as she held Alice against her. “I was considering being mad at you, but now all I want to do is rain kisses all over your face,” Bella continued, trying not to think about how much she’d like rain kisses over other parts of Alice’s body as well.
“Well,” Alice began slowly, her voice almost timid. “You know what they say about resisting temptation,” she continued softly, sweet smelling breath tickling Bella’s throat in the most delicious way.
Bella shifted on the mattress, something in Alice’s tone catching her attention.
Being careful not to disturb Alice too much, Bella pushed herself up onto her elbow so that she was looking down at the petite vampire beside her. Alice, whose head was now resting comfortably on one of Bella’s pillows, returned her gaze unblinkingly, waiting patiently to see what Bella would say.
“I think it has something to do with yielding to it,” Bella said, her voice barely more than a whisper, her eyes watching Alice keenly, looking for a sign as to what the raven-haired beauty was thinking.
She knew what she wanted Alice’s comment to mean, what she wanted Alice to be thinking, but she needed to be sure. She didn’t want to scare Alice away again.
Alice closed her eyes, her body going still. For a moment, she lay there, prone and silent, then her eyes opened again and she took a deep breath.
“Yes,” Alice drawled, her voice a little lower than it had been the last time she spoke. “That’s what I’ve heard as well,” she purred, her eyes locking on Bella’s with a shocking intensity.
Bella’s heart began to thump in her chest.
The look in Alice’s eyes was almost indecent. It practically took her breath away. She didn’t think that she had ever seen such a combination of raw, unfettered need and aching tenderness before.
She had never made love to someone, but she knew what want looked like, what desire looked like, and Alice’s eyes were full of both. Yet, there was also something tender in her expression, something in the way her eyes shimmered that let Bella know that Alice would hold her tenderly as the earth shattered around her, and that then when she crashed it would be into the loving circle of Alice’s arms.
“I want …” Bella began softly, a powerful ache coursing through her body as she stared at Alice’s perfect face. She wanted, so badly, to press her lips against Alice’s, to put her hands on her body, to feel the cool tautness of her stomach and thighs, to feel the gentle weight of Alice’s breasts in her hands. She wanted, oh how she wanted.
“I know,” Alice said softly, her voice quivering a little with what Bella was surprised to realize was nervousness.
Then she understood. She knew that when Alice had closed her eyes she had had a vision of what Bella wanted. The only question was whether Alice wanted it too. After all, Alice’s position was different to hers. Alice still had Jasper to consider, whereas Edward was no longer in the picture for her. She was free now to desire Alice as desperately as she wanted without potentially hurting someone else she cared about. But Alice was not so free, and might not be able to consent, no matter how much she wanted to. And Bella was sure that she wanted to.
“I want you too,” Alice breathed out, her hand reaching out for Bella, caressing her cheek softly. “I need you,” she whispered, her thumb moving to trace Bella’s full bottom lip.
Bella released a shuddering breath, her eyes squeezing shut as the realization that she was going to make love to Alice Cullen crashed into her like a freight train. She was going to make love to Alice Cullen. She was going to make love to Alice Cullen. She and Alice Cullen were going to make love.
Bella trembled.
“I’ve never done this before,” Bella said softly, the admission no where near as embarrassing as she had imagined it would be. She was comfortable with Alice, she trusted Alice; she could tell Alice anything.
“I have,” Alice said, pushing up onto her elbow as well so that she could look Bella in the eye. “It’ll be okay,” she continued gently, reaching out for Bella, brushing some stray strands of brown hair behind her ear tenderly. “We’ll go slowly,” she went on, leaning forward to press her lips against Bella’s, bestowing upon her the softest, sweetest kiss Bella had ever known. “And if at any time you want me to stop,” Alice began pulling away from Bella’s lips.
“I won’t,” Bella said, her voice soft but fierce. “I could never want that,” she continued, leaning forward to kiss Alice, her hand moving to rest on Alice’s solid, but slight hip.
“You may,” Alice said, her hand moving to cover Bella’s, her fingers stroking lightly across the back of Bella’s hand. “And if you do, I want you to tell me. Don’t be shy if you change your mind, or I do something you don’t like,” she continued. “Promise me you’ll tell me,” she requested, her tone soft, but her eyes firm. “If I ever did anything against your will I’d have to turn myself over to your werewolf friend,” she went on smiling a little, though her eyes were serious. “And I really don’t want to have to do that.”
“I promise,” Bella said, grasping Alice’s hand and squeezing. “I won’t want you to stop, I know that I won’t,” she added. “But I promise.”
A small tremble ran through Alice’s body.
“Okay,” she whispered.
And then she leaned forward and pressed her lips against Bella’s once more.
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Bella watched, mesmerized, as Alice slipped gracefully off of the bed and moved to stand beside it. Moonlight flittered in through her open window, and Alice’s skin sparkled in the light. So beautiful, Bella thought blinking. She could feel the sting of tear beginning in her eyes, but tried to will them away. She didn’t want to cry. She didn’t want her vision marred. She didn’t want to miss looking at Alice for even a second.
Alice moved her hands to her waist, her fingers playing across her abdomen for a moment, and then she grasped the helm of the spaghetti string tank she was wearing and pulled it over her head.
Bella released a ragged breath as Alice’s breasts were revealed to her, the sight of the soft, rose capped mounds sending an electric tingle throughout her body. They were even more amazing than Bella had imagined, and given the perfection of everything else on Alice she had imagined them to be spectacular.
Unconsciously Bella shifted on the bed, moving closer to the edge, and to Alice.
Alice’s hands returned to her hips, and she hooked her thumbs into the waistband of the tiny shorts she was wearing. Bella breathed in deeply, wondering if Alice wasn’t wearing anything underneath those as well.
Biting her bottom lip, Bella watched as Alice flicked her wrists, and then the shorts were falling down trim legs and pooling around her ankles.
Bella, having watched the progression of the shorts down Alice’s legs, watched as Alice daintily stepped out of the fallen shorts, her breath hitching in her chest when she looked up to find an entirely nude Alice Cullen standing in front of her gleaming in the moonlight.
“Angel,” Bella breathed out, crawling to the side of the bed until she was kneeling on the edge, directly in front of where Alice was standing.
Alice smiled gently at her, her hand reaching out to cup Bella cheek. “A fallen one maybe,” she breathed out, and then she leaned down and pressed her lips against Bella’s, kissing her passionately, as Bella wrapped her arms around Alice’s nude waist.
Bella reveled in the feel of Alice’s cool skin underneath her hands. No matter where her fingers trailed they encountered deliciously smooth, soft flesh.
It was wonderful.
Bella leaned up, one of her hands moving to tangle in Alice’s short hair, kissing her with increasing intensity as her free hand trailed over Alice’s lower back, and then traveled further until she was clutching at Alice’s ass.
Alice moaned into Bella’s mouth, and reached out, grasping Bella around the waist, pulling her roughly into her body, the scrape of Bella’s clothes against her naked flesh making her shiver, and groan.
Alice pulled away from Bella’s lips, but still held her close. She leaned in, breathing in deeply and then placed her lips besides Bella’s ear.
“Can I undress you?” she asked softly, her voice shaking as she spoke.
“God, yes,” Bella whispered back. “Do it now.”
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Bella closed her eyes, breathing in and out deeply as Alice pulled her underwear and pajama pants down her legs. She was trembling constantly, but trying to control it. She didn’t want Alice to think she was having second thoughts and stop touching her. It was just that the only other person to see her naked was her mother, and the last time that had happened was when she was ten. She didn’t want Alice to stop, but she was nervous as hell about revealing herself to someone as perfect as Alice.
Bella felt Alice’s cool lips press against her thigh, and then her stomach, and then she could feel Alice’s body draped along hers, cooling the left side of her body, as sweet, cool breath caressed her face.
Bella opened her eyes, and Alice smiled down at her, her hand moving soothingly across Bella’s stomach.
“Hello,” Alice said softly, her eyes twinkling warmly as Bella looked up at her.
“Hey,” Bella said, blushing though she didn’t remove her eyes from Alice’s.
Alice stared at her for a second, and then her eyes dropped, her dark pupils watching as her hand trailed over Bella’s torso.
“You’re so beautiful,” Alice breathed out, her fingers brushing along the underside of Bella’s breast, making her shiver. “So beautiful,” Alice repeated softly, her hand gently cupping Bella’s breast. “I never want to stop touching you.”
“Then don’t,” Bella responded, her voice feathery light as she held Alice’s gaze.
Alice breathed in deeply and smiled, and then she leaned down again, pressing her lips against Bella’s as her thumb brushed across Bella’s nipple.
“Oh god,” Bella moaned, her hand moving to tangle in Alice’s hair again.
She kissed Alice back with all that she was, her back arching up, pushing her breast into Alice’s hand.
She never wanted Alice to stop touching her either.
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Bella forced her eyes open as she felt Alice still above her, her hands and lips no longer moving against her.
“What …” Bella began to ask, her eyes blinking rapidly as she tried to ascertain why Alice had stopped touching her.
“I wanted to see your eyes,” Alice responded softly, her hand sliding down from Bella’s breast to her hip. She then shifted slightly, her knee nudging against Bella’s legs, until Bella automatically spread them further apart.
Bella’s eyes widened, a ragged breath of air escaping her as Alice slipped a cool, powerful thigh between her legs, nestling it against her sex.
Instinctively Bella pressed down, a groan escaping her lips as the heat of her center met the cool firmness of Alice’s thigh.
Bella hips jerked once, and then again, and again.
Alice purred; her eyes closing with pleasure as Bella’s wetness began to spread against her thigh.
“Alice,” Bella said, her tone strangled and a little panicked as she continued to thrust helplessly against Alice, her body moving completely of its own accord.
She wanted to stop thrusting against Alice. She felt like she should, like it was rude to be rubbing herself against her so desperately. But it felt so good. It felt so incredibly good, that she just could stop doing it, not matter how much her mind told her it was wrong.
“Ssh,” Alice murmured, her hand beginning to move soothingly against Bella’s side. She leaned down and kissed her softly. “It’s okay,” Alice said softly, pulling back. “Does it feel good?”
Bella nodded, blushing, and Alice smiled.
“It feels good for me too,” Alice said, pressing her lips to the corner of Bella’s mouth, and then against her jaw and her cheek until her lips were next to Bella’s ear. “The way you’re moving. Your warmth,” Alice moaned, her own hips twitching in sympathy. “You’re so wet,” she breathed out, her hand moving to Bella’s breast again.
“Is that good?” Bella asked quietly. Alice’s words embarrassed her, but at the same time they also made her body tingle even more.
“It’s good,” Alice said kissing Bella’s throat. “It’s very good,” she continued kissing her way down to Bella’s chest. “You’re making me so …” Alice paused, struggling to find an eloquent word to describe her current state. She couldn’t find one. “So … horny,” she whispered, her face pressing against Bella’s full breasts.
And then Alice turned her head to the side and took one of Bella’s nipples into her mouth, sucking on it as if her life depended on it.
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Bella twisted beneath Alice, her body covered in sweat as her head thrashed from side to side, her hands clawing at Alice, running over her body, squeezing and scratching at whatever she could reach.
Her mind was fuzzy and hot, a techno-colour dreamscape. Sounds that she had never heard before escaped from her lips, and her body moved in ways she had no control over. Her heart beat faster and faster, and her hips jerked again and again. She felt like if something didn’t happen that she was doing to die, or go insane, or maybe both.
“Alice,” she gasped, Alice’s name falling from her lips again and again, a desperate mantra.
Alice shifted, drawing her leg out from between Bella’s thighs, and placed a kiss between Bella’s breasts before she began to kiss her way down her stomach.
Bella’s legs tried to close, tried to squeeze together to get some kind of stimulation, but Alice kept them apart with firm but gentle hands.
“Alice,” Bella cried again, an answering murmur that Bella couldn’t decipher reaching her ears.
And then Bella’s eyes snapped open, her heart stopping altogether for a moment, and she sat up slightly, just enough so that she could look between her legs.
Bella groaned.
It was as she had thought. Alice’s head was between her legs, and her tongue was …
Bella collapsed back against the mattress, her hand unconsciously moving to tangle in Alice’s hair once more as Alice’s tongue began to move against her.
Bella hips jumped, the thought ‘she’s licking me’ running through her head again and again, her mind thrilling at the idea that Alice Cullen’s mouth was between her legs … licking and sucking, making her feel better than she had ever conceived was possible.
And then it happened.
Bella’s breath caught in her throat, her fingers stiffening in Alice’s hair, and her hips jerked up. Then she was trembling as pleasure ripped through her body, her mind exploding in a sea of colour and lights. Her hips bucked, her pleasure flooding Alice’s lips which were still pressed against her center, licking and sucking, even as Bella’s body quaked.
Bella collapsed against the mattress, unseeing and unhearing as her muscles twitched, only vague aware of the feeling of Alice kissing her way up her body, and then wrapping her arms around her waist, drawing her against her body, holding her tenderly as Bella waited for her brain to engage once more.
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Bella moaned, her arms tightening around Alice as she buried her face in her neck.
“Oh my god,” Bella whispered, her voice weak and raw as she clung to Alice’s strong frame, “Oh my god,” she repeated, unable to find any other words that came close to elucidating the mind-blowing experience they had just shared. “My god,” Bella breathed out.
Alice smiled, her chest vibrating pleasantly as she laughed lightly, her fingers combing through Bella’s hair soothingly.
“I thought I was an angel,” Alice murmured softly, chuckling again when Bella hit her weakly on the hip in response.
Bella left her hand lying on Alice’s hip for a moment, and then began to stroke the smooth skin, her lips moving against the column of Alice’s throat.
Alice caught her hand, stilling it gently.
“You can barely keep your eyes open,” Alice breathed out, moving Bella’s hand, wrapping it around her waist instead.
Bella had been running on empty since before she had shown up at the Swan residence, her near death experience taking a lot out of her, not to mention the emotional upheaval that her appearance had caused. Alice certainly didn’t mind Bella touching her, but she knew that Bella would likely fall asleep before they could even really begin, and she’d have to leave and hunt if she got any more excited.
“I wanna touch you,” Bella said, pushing up onto her hand so that she could look down at Alice. But she had to struggle to keep her eyes open, and was only able to support her weight for a few seconds before she dropped back onto the mattress and rolled into Alice’s open arms.
“You can,” Alice said gently. “Later, after you’ve gotten some sleep.”
“But,” Bella objected weakly. “You said …” she continued, letting the sentence drop off as she blushed.
“What?” Alice prompted kindly, genuinely curious as to what it was that Bella had to say.
“Don’t you need to … you know,” Bella said softly, her face becoming even hotter as she spoke. “You said you were horny,” she continued, the last word barely audible as it dropped from her lips.
“Oh,” Alice breathed out, realizing that Bella was concerned about leaving her unsatisfied. “I’m fine,” Alice said kissing the top of Bella’s head. “I came with you,” she continued. “It wasn’t quite as big as yours, but I think I’ll be able to last until you’ve gotten some sleep,” she continued rubbing Bella’s back lightly.
“How …?” Bella began to ask before she could think better of it, and stopped. She hadn’t touched Alice’s center, and she had felt both of Alice’s hands on her thighs, holding her and knew she wasn’t touching herself, so she didn’t understand how Alice had been able to orgasm too.
“Your pleasure is my pleasure,” Alice said softly, knowing what Bella was going to ask. “Tasting you, hearing you, feeling your body move,” she continued her voice dropping into that purr that Bella was becoming so fond of, “it brought me over.”
“Really?” Bella asked, a warm tingle traveling through her at the thought.
“Really,” Alice confirmed.
“Is it because of your vampire senses?” Bella asked sleepily.
Alice laughed softly. “They certainly don’t hurt,” she responded, “You taste as good as you smell. But, I think touching you would have been enough even if I was human,” Alice added, eyes fluttering as her hunger flared.
“Oh wow,” Bella murmured, half-awed, half-asleep.
Alice closed her eyes and released her breath slowly through her nose. She breathed in deeply and then released it slowly through her nose. She repeated this four more times, and the hunger finally passed.
Allowing her eyes to open again, Alice focused her senses on Bella, picking up to slow, regular beat of her heart almost immediately. She knew that rhythm, and that Bella would soon be fast asleep.
Alice brought her hand up to stroke Bella’s hair, sighing contentedly as Bella murmured something nonsensical against her chest, and snuggled in closer.
Allowing her eyes to close once more, Alice began to hum softly, a happy smile spreading across her lips as Bella drifted off to sleep.
To be continued …
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Date: 2008-08-21 07:49 am (UTC)I think you should rewrite the books cuz this is way better then the stupid edward/bella storyline. I still cant believe i wasted all my time reading all 4 books, a total waste of time. Although the Bella/Alice parts were nice and so gay.
Even my sister picked up on that and shes 12.
I like Alice way better then Edward so much that he doesn't exist.
Everything Alice says is sweet compared to Edward who i spent most of my times rolling my eyes at he's such a dweeb.
Update soon :)
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Date: 2008-08-23 05:03 pm (UTC)Edward/Bella ruins everything. They are totally the reason that I can't finish reading the series. I love the Cullens (especially mah boo Alice), I like the werewovles and Charlie, but I HATE Edward/Bella, and there's just too much of them for me to get through it.
Although the Bella/Alice parts were nice and so gay. Even my sister picked up on that and shes 12.
So gay. So gay I acutally thought it might be a plot point (like in the Gemma Doyle triology). I should've known better though since Meyer has total girl wood for Edward and loves him so much.
Also, your sister is clearly awesome :D
Edward who i spent most of my times rolling my eyes at he's such a dweeb.
Oh my god, I know! I don't think he's sweet, or charming, or perfect at all. I want to claw my eyes out almost every time he opens his mouth. I find nothing dazzling about book!Edward. The only good thing about Edward is that Cedric Diggory is playing him.
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Date: 2008-08-21 08:26 am (UTC)Love it, well that and the rest of it too :)
thank you :)
patiently waiting for more
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Date: 2008-08-23 05:04 pm (UTC)I hope to have the next part up soon :D
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Date: 2008-08-21 01:36 pm (UTC)And then Bella’s eyes snapped open, her heart stopping altogether for a moment, and she sat up slightly, just enough so that she could look between her legs.
And that's what I call knowing the human psyche! Perfectly written as always.
...So I finished that 'cherry', only, I can't seem to be able to make an lj cut thing work. Stupid machine things. If you can lend a hand it would be greatly appreciated. Otherwise, I posted the fic on fanfiction .net anyhow. Same penname.
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Date: 2008-08-23 05:08 pm (UTC)LOL! You have no idea how hard I have been struggling to keep Bella/Alice relatively pure. You'll see, there'll be one chapter in the future where you'll say to yourself "this is it, this is the one that Janine had to struggle not to turn into dirty porn", lol.
And that's what I call knowing the human psyche!
I'm glad that I could be of service :D
So I finished that 'cherry', only, I can't seem to be able to make an lj cut thing work.
Sweet!
All you have to do for an LJ cut is:
[lj-cut text="TYPE IN WHAT YOU WANT TO APPEAR IN THE LINK">CONTENT/STORY[/lj-cut]
Only, you need to replace the [] with <>
Hope that helps :D
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Date: 2008-08-21 01:46 pm (UTC)Re: Tears of Joy
Date: 2008-08-23 05:09 pm (UTC)Re: Tears of Joy
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Date: 2008-08-21 03:17 pm (UTC)I'm glad you took the time to develop the relationship between these two so that you could make Bella your own and dig into why Alice would be so taken with her.
I find Bella a lot less annoying in this, and whenever Alice reflects on how Bella lacks the basic sense of self preservation that most people have, it's very cute and endearing even.
Anyways, enjoying your writing as always and wondering how Alice is going to deal with her other - blood-related - dilemna which Bella is completely oblivious about, like always. Well, at least Alice is going into this knowing what the score is with Bella.
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Date: 2008-08-23 05:25 pm (UTC)lol. I'm glad, cause there were times in the book where I wanted to just smack Bella across the face. I most confess, it would probably be difficult unto impossible to have made her MORE annoying though. Meyer is just so good at making Bella irritating, I couldn't compete with that ;)
and whenever Alice reflects on how Bella lacks the basic sense of self preservation that most people have, it's very cute and endearing even.
lol. You know Alice thinks it's cute, cause otherwise she wouldn't have got no lovin' :D
Anyways, enjoying your writing as always and wondering how Alice is going to deal with her other - blood-related - dilemna which Bella is completely oblivious about, like always.
LOL. I was debating with myself on where to actually have a chapter that delved into the awkwardness that would be Bella's period, but now that I know other people are wondering about it too, I'm gonna do it. It's an issue! You know it's an issue! Plus, it could be pretty hilarious :D
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Date: 2008-08-21 07:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-08-23 05:29 pm (UTC)That is a good idea. Really don't read them. Don't even pick one up. I know it's hypocritical of me, since I'm like ficcing it, but these books are just painful. Avoid. Avoid. You will live a happier, fuller life for it :D
That being said, I'm glad that you're enjoying the fic :D I've tried to minimize the things that enrage about the books in it, so I'm happy that it's been enjoyable so far.
I hope to have the next chapter up soon :D Thanks for commenting!
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Date: 2008-08-21 08:05 pm (UTC)Yeah, kay.
So HOT! and beautiful and amazing. I love your Bella. and Alice is just amazing. Can't wait for more.
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Date: 2008-08-23 05:33 pm (UTC)*runs to safety deposit box* Ha! You're not getting that back!
... just joking. I've got a nice cushioned soul basket right beside my bed. I'll give it a hand towel to use as a blanket and every night we'll listen to Hercules and Love Affair before going to bed.
Seriously though, I'm glad that you liked the update. I was trying to make it hot and tasteful, and I'm glad that it worked out alright :D
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Date: 2008-08-21 09:10 pm (UTC)-“Can I undress you?” she asked softly, her voice shaking as she spoke.
“God, yes,” Bella whispered back. “Do it now.”-
I have a feeling this would always be Bella's answer...at home, in a movie theater, in the middle of the Louvre...
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Date: 2008-08-23 05:35 pm (UTC)lol. I'm glad you liked it. That was one of those lines where I was like, "is this actually funny, or am I just weird?"
I have a feeling this would always be Bella's answer...at home, in a movie theater, in the middle of the Louvre...
So true. And really, who could blame her. Not I, not I. I mean, it's Alice muthafucking Cullen we're talking about here.
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Date: 2008-08-21 09:19 pm (UTC)What a wonderful thing to come home to. So sweet, so endearing, so beautiful, so charming! You've officially turned Alice Cullen into the heart-throb of the ages. Brilliant, brilliant work as always. Everything about this chapter was just awesome and well worth the wait!
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Date: 2008-08-23 05:40 pm (UTC)Oh Sugar Rush, how bitter I was when you were canceled.
I'm really glad that you enjoyed the update. And that the love scene was tasteful instead of overly porny. I was worried because previous to starting this Herculean series I'd mostly been writing porny stuff, lol.
You've officially turned Alice Cullen into the heart-throb of the ages.
*gives the finger to Mr. Darcy*
Seriously though, I'm glad that you're enjoying her! I just love Alice so much in the books (the only thing about the books I've loved), and she seems like she would be a hundred million times better to be in a relationship with than Edward.
Hope to have the next update up soon :D
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Date: 2008-08-22 01:09 am (UTC)I wanna make love to your brain and all the characters and amazingness inside. (wow, that just sounded so romantic. . .)
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Date: 2008-08-23 05:42 pm (UTC)A brain orgy sounds so good right now, it's been a hell of a week! Mm, brain orgies. So much fun.
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Date: 2008-08-22 03:21 am (UTC)Re: Renesemee
Date: 2008-08-23 05:53 pm (UTC)Renesmee probably will not be making an appearance if the series continues to go the way I think it will. I'm sure she's a great little baby, though :D
And suddenly I realize what a violent comment this is. Never mind...
Don't worry, Jacob and the Cullen's are beloved by me as well, no harm shall come to them ... well, maybe Edward ;)
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Date: 2008-08-22 05:25 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-08-23 05:56 pm (UTC)Now that's a show I'd watch!
Such delicacy of care and tenderness amidst the passion
I'm glad that it was sweet and tender. I wasn't sure if I was making too porny, but I wanted to have enough detail that it was hot, so I'm glad I managed to walk the line :D
hugs janine to bosom and looks at the flying doves with shimmering eyes
Mm, bosom.
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Date: 2008-08-22 10:05 am (UTC)I has no words left
ow
wow
hotness has exploded my brain
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Date: 2008-08-23 05:58 pm (UTC)Next chapter, Bella gets to indulge in some of her Alice Cullen fantasies, lol
Amazing...as per usual
Date: 2008-08-22 11:35 am (UTC)While i am loving this (as i always do of all your work) first and foremost i am a blackcest whore...so in a selfish attempt to get you to write more of that hottness i am going to try and tempt you with some prompts: ahem...
-Jealous!Lucius - Narcissa/Bella
-Black sisters - fun in school
-Harry, Ron & Hermione (harryronhermione) - somehow viewing the sexiness that is blackcest..there thoughts
-Black sisters - phone sex!
okay...im done. I blame you for this addiction, by the way, haha
Re: Amazing...as per usual
Date: 2008-08-23 06:01 pm (UTC)i am going to try and tempt you with some prompts: ahem...
Those are some delicious blackcest prompts. I never leave blackcest completely, and I'd definitely like to try and tackle a couple of these. I've gotta finish this Alice/Bella story first though. I'm obsessed with it right now and can't focus on anything else, lol. But don't worry, there will be more blackcest from me :D
Re: Amazing...as per usual
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Date: 2008-08-22 02:05 pm (UTC)so, i just wanted to let you know...
YOU.ROCK.HARD :-)
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Date: 2008-08-23 06:18 pm (UTC)Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you're enjoying it (and don't worry, the books aren't really that great, lol)
i feel like a 16 year old boy who just saw his first set of boobies.
That may be the sweetest thing I've ever heard :D
I'll try not to keep you waiting too long for the next chaper :D
Brilliant!
Date: 2008-08-23 10:07 pm (UTC)Can't wait to read the next update!
Re: Brilliant!
Date: 2008-08-25 06:03 am (UTC)It's such a shame Stephenie Meyer doesn't just bump Edward off in a freak fishing accident and focus on Alice and Bella instead
Oh, man. If this had happened it would have been so beautiful. I hate Edward and Bella together so much. I think they bring out the absolute worst in each other, and when they are around each other I hate them both so much. When Bella is around other people she's not half bad, and of course Alice is composed entirely of win and is awesome all the time, lol
Next update should be really soon! Hope you enjoy :D
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Date: 2008-08-28 12:43 am (UTC)And by addicted, I mean holy shit this is hot as hell. O_O
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Date: 2008-09-11 07:59 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-01 11:06 pm (UTC)Very hot and at the same time extremely tender. The nervousness of "the first time" *g*
Bella hips jumped, the thought ‘she’s licking me’ running through her head again and again, her mind thrilling at the idea that Alice Cullen’s mouth was between her legs *lol*
This is exactly how it should have been in the books (I read them, all four of them. I quite liked them despite Edward. Alice kept me going *lol*)
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Date: 2008-12-22 02:10 am (UTC)But *this*, I love! I love Alice Cullen so much. and I now have a ratherlarge girl crush on A Greene, so thanks...
I'm even using her as inspiration in an upcoming fic! When's the new chapter coming out, you tease?
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Date: 2008-12-22 06:26 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-02 08:22 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-08 02:59 am (UTC)angelalice is just the sweetest thing to ever happen in this world. i feel so bad for having neglected her all this time, sigh. thank you for opening my eyes loland most importantly, thank you for this chapter. ty ty ty!!
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Date: 2010-07-12 07:31 pm (UTC)